I just havehave just read a post on Instagram about suicide.

This guy wrote about how he safeved a life a year ago.

There was a man, who wanted to jump from a bridge and end his life.

But this Instagram guy was there at the right time and in the right place to help him.

And he started to reflect on how a little change in our own plans can docreate a huge change in our lifves or someone else's life.

This is just the perspective from someone standing on the other side of the man that wanted to commit suicide.

And sometimes I'm afraid of them because I don't know how strong I am to stop them or if I'm able to stop them to play withfrom controlling my mind.

In those moments life seems to me so horrible to me.

Then, when these thoughts do their part, which is torturing me, they abandoned me and left me empty, tired, and dry.

Just keeping everything in the same tense

Because of this post on Instagram, I began to think about it and I realized that these thoughts are like these annoying visitors who no one wants but in any case, the comecome anyway.

The problem is that these onethoughts can take you to your death.

A death, that maybe you could regret or maybe will no t.

A death that leaves broken hearts and that no one understands or expecteds.

The trick is that this death is being slowly and silently waved in our heads.

I wishhope thise man from the bridge is doing okay :)

This guy wrote how he safeved a life a year ago.

"Safe" is an adjective, but "save" is a verb

There was a man, who wanted to jump from a bridge and end his life.

You don't need the comma there.

But this Instagram guy was there at the right time and in the right place to help him.

And he started to reflect on how a little change in our plans can do a huge change in our lifves or someone else's life.

This is just the perspective from someone standing on the other side of the man that wanted to commit suicide.

So now I'm wondering how this man endsed up so close to his death, and how many things had happened to him to make him want to do that.

How dark and strong were his thoughts to lead him to that point.?

A question mark is better suited to end the sentence because you are asking a question.

And sometimes I'm afraid of them because I don't know how strong I am to stop them or if I'm able to can stop them to play with my mind.

They feed themselves with my insecurities, mistakes, regrets, and even my wishes.

In those moments life seems to me so horrible to me.

Your sentence structure was just a little bit off.

Then, when these thoughts do their part, which is of torturing me, they abandoned me and leftave me empty, tired, and dry.

You need to make sure that the sentence tense is consistent.

Because of this post on Instagram, I began to think about it and I realized that these thoughts are like these annoying visitors whom no one wants, but in any case, they come anyway.

The problem is that these onethoughts can take you to your death.

You need to make your antecedents clear.

A death, that maybe you cwould regret (or maybe not) .

A death that leaves broken hearts and thatbehind because no one understandsood or expected it.

The trick is that this death is beingmoves slowly and silently waved in our heads.

I wishhope thise man from the bridge is doing ok :)ay.