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Thought of the day
Some time ago ( a long time, to be honest) there was a popular proverb that a real French women can create a salad, a fashionable hat and a scandal from absolutely nothing.
Now I think the time has come to add to this list a LinkedIn post.
No doubt, we, as a society, have a huge progress here for last 30 years.
Is it good or is it bad I do not know.
But I have to say that it would be interesting to see which another issue e will add in next 10 years.
Some time ago ( a long time, to be honest) there was a popular proverb that a real French womean can create a salad, a fashionable hat and a scandal from absolutely nothing.
When is a saying a proverb? To me, this saying is too limited to have that status.
Now I think the time has come to add to this list a LinkedIn post to this/the list .
natural word order in English
"This list" is fine, but I prefer "the list" which seems to say that there is only one list, the one in the saying.
No doubt, we, as a society, have amade huge progress here forin the last 30 years.
"huge" refers to size. I prefer "great" because it's less specific.
Is it good, or is it bad?
A question mark is required punctuation.
But I have to say that it would be interesting to see which another issue e[ ] will be add ed in the next 10 years.
The items on the list aren't "issues." They could be described as abilities, skills, or possibly talents.
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An interesting idea to add something to the saying and an interesting choice of what to add.
Good job!
Thought of the dDay
Proper capitalization in your title.
Some time ago ( a long time, to be honest) , there was a popular proverb that a real French womean canould create a salad, a fashionable hat, and a scandal from absolutely nothing.
Remove extra space after “(”.
Add comma after the parenthetical phrase for smoother flow.
"woman" Singular subject matches “a real French.”
"could" Past tense consistency with “there was.”
Now I think the time has come to add to this list a LinkedIn post to this list.
Reorder words for natural phrasing.
No doubt, we, as a society, have amade huge progress here forover the last 30 years.
Remove unnecessary commas around “we, as a society.”
"have made huge progress" Correct verb usage.
"over the last 30 years" Correct preposition.
Is it good or is it bad?
Add question mark after the first clause to reflect the interrogative form.
But I have to say that it would be interesting to see which another issue we will add in the next 10 years.
"which issue" because “Another” is unnecessary here.
"we" Correct typo
"in the next 10 years" Add article “the” for grammatical correctness.
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Corrections are mostly about grammar details, word order, and prepositions. Good job, keep writing!
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Some time ago ( a long time, to be honest) there was a popular proverb that a real French women can create a salad, a fashionable hat and a scandal from absolutely nothing. Some time ago ( Remove extra space after “(”. Add comma after the parenthetical phrase for smoother flow. "woman" Singular subject matches “a real French.” "could" Past tense consistency with “there was.” Some time ago ( When is a saying a proverb? To me, this saying is too limited to have that status. |
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Now I think the time has come to add to this list a LinkedIn post. Now I think Reorder words for natural phrasing. Now I think natural word order in English "This list" is fine, but I prefer "the list" which seems to say that there is only one list, the one in the saying. |
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No doubt, we, as a society, have a huge progress here for last 30 years. No doubt, we Remove unnecessary commas around “we, as a society.” "have made huge progress" Correct verb usage. "over the last 30 years" Correct preposition. No doubt, we, as a society, have "huge" refers to size. I prefer "great" because it's less specific. |
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Is it good or is it bad Is it good or is it bad? Add question mark after the first clause to reflect the interrogative form. Is it good, or is it bad? A question mark is required punctuation. |
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I do not know. |
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But I have to say that it would be interesting to see which another issue e will add in next 10 years. But I have to say that it would be interesting "which issue" because “Another” is unnecessary here. "we" Correct typo "in the next 10 years" Add article “the” for grammatical correctness. But I have to say that it would be interesting The items on the list aren't "issues." They could be described as abilities, skills, or possibly talents. |
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