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naho2863

Aug. 31, 2022

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This summer

I don't remember but I think this was a great season.
Definitely this summer I improve a lot on good habits than the others.
but I think it was more on the side of writing and planing it than doing it.

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This sSummer.

I don't remember, but I think ithis was a great season.

Definitely tThis summer I definitely improved a lot on my good habits than the, compared to others.

bBut I think it was more on the side ofdid more writing and planning it than actually doing it.

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Good job!

This summer

I don't remember too well, but I think this was a great season.

Definitely tThis summer, I improvehave definitely worked on a lot onf good habits than the othercompared to the previous ones.

We would say, "working on a habit" rather than "improving on a habit". Sort of how we would say "working on my piano playing" or "working on my writing skills".

bBut I think itI was more on the side of writing down and planning it thanthings than actually doing ithem.

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Good attempt! I could understand what you were saying well :)

This summer


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This sSummer.

I don't remember but I think this was a great season.


I don't remember too well, but I think this was a great season.

I don't remember, but I think ithis was a great season.

Definitely this summer I improve a lot on good habits than the others.


Definitely tThis summer, I improvehave definitely worked on a lot onf good habits than the othercompared to the previous ones.

We would say, "working on a habit" rather than "improving on a habit". Sort of how we would say "working on my piano playing" or "working on my writing skills".

Definitely tThis summer I definitely improved a lot on my good habits than the, compared to others.

but I think it was more on the side of writing and planing it than doing it.


bBut I think itI was more on the side of writing down and planning it thanthings than actually doing ithem.

bBut I think it was more on the side ofdid more writing and planning it than actually doing it.

To sound more natural

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