Jan. 8, 2020
(This post is written in contracted form. It would be helpful, if you could check my sentences with contraction. )
Before the New Year holidays started, I'd been determined to learn a whole word book, but I attended to language exchange meet-ups. I ended up going to meet-ups 7 days in a row from 30th to 5th.
I attended twice a day, and after meet-ups, I went out for supper with the people I got to know at those meet-ups. Every day was busy and tiring, but I was very glad to have conversations with many people from other countries. It was fun.
They told me how they learned Japanese language and I got some nice advice.
I've studied English with a focus on reading and writing but I'll try to change the way of studying to a focus on listening and speaking from now on.
As for a speaking practice, it'll be difficult to carry out as I don't have anyone who talks to me, but I'll try to talk to myself out loud, sometimes I play double role (lol).
Monday was the first working day of this year. I've already been tired due to lack of sleep. It was the first time I hadn't have enough sleep during the New Year holidays. But I was honestly satisfied with a different New Year holidays than usual.
今年の正月休み
正月休みに入る前は単語帳一冊を覚えようと意気込んでいたが、言語交換ミートアップに参加してしまい、結局、30日から5日まで7日連続で参加してしまった。
一日2回参加したり、ミートアップの後ごはん食べに行ったりと、ハードな毎日でさすがに疲れたが、でもいろんな国の人達と話すことができて本当によかった。楽しかった。
彼らがどうやって日本語を覚えたのか勉強法を教えてもらった。私は読み書き中心の練習をしてたけど、今後はリスニング、スピーキング中心に変えるつもり。スピーキングは相手がいないので実行は難しいが、独り言でいこうと思う。たまに一人二役で(笑)。
月曜日は初出勤なのに寝不足で疲れていた。正月休みにたっぷり睡眠をとらなかったのは初めてだった。でも、いつもと違う正月休みに正直満足している。
Thise New Year Holidays
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This New Year's Holidays
"The holidays" refers to the end of year when we have Christmas and New Year's. So you should say "Holidays" if you're referring to all the days off around the end of the year, or "Holiday" if you're referring to one vacation alone.
(This post is written in contracted form. It would be helpful, if you could check my sentences with contractions. ) Before the New Year's holidays started, I'd been determined to learn a whole word book, but I attended to language exchange meet-ups instead.
I'm not sure what you mean by a "word book". A book for learners? A book with stories or learning material? A novel?
I ended up going to meet-ups 7 days in a row from the 30th to the 5th.
I attended twicewent to two a day, and after meet-ups,wards I went out for supper with the people I got to know at those meet-upsthere.
Every day was busy and tiring, but I was very glad to have conversations with many people from other countries.
It was fun.
They told me how they learned Japanese language and I got some nice advice.
日本語 and 日本人 both translate to Japanese, but don't worry, you usually don't need to specify. We can tell by context here :) In fact it's more normal to specify "Japanese person" but almost never "Japanese language".
I've studied English with a focus on reading and writing but I'll try to change the way ofI'm studying to a focus on listening and speaking from now on.
As for a speaking practice, it'll be difficult to carry out as I don't have anyone who talks to me, but I'll try to talk to myself out loud, sometimes I play a double role (lol).
Monday was the first working day of this year.
I've was already been tired due to lack of sleep.
It was the first time I hadn't haved enough sleep during the New Year's holidays.
But I was honestly satisfied with a different New Year's holidays thant was different from usual.
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Good job, your use of contractions was very well done in this entry.
This New Year's Holidays
(This post is written inwith contracted formions. It would be helpful, if you could check my sentences with contractions. ) Before the New Year's holidays started, I'd been determined to lrearnd a whole word book, but instead I attended to language exchange meet-ups.
to contract or contracted is generally used in an entirely different context. I was confused until I read the next sentence and saw "with contraction".
I ended up going to meet-ups 7 days in a row from the 30th to the 5th.
I attended meet-ups twice a day, and, after meet-upwards, I went out for supper with the people I got to know at those meet-upsem.
Every day was busy and tiring, but I was very glad to have conversations with many people from other countries.
It was fun.
They told me how they had learned Japanese language and I got some nice advice.
I've studied English with a focus on reading and writing but I'll try to change the way of studying to a focus ton listening and speaking from now on.
As for a speaking practice, it'll be difficult to carry out as I don't have anyone who talks to me, but I'll try to talk to myself out loud, - sometimes I play doubleing two roles (lol).
Monday was the first working day of this year.
I'vem already been tired due to lack of sleep.
It was the first time I hadn't haved enough sleep during the New Year holiday's.
In a past compound tense "have" never comes second.
But I was honestly satisfied with a different New Year holiday's than usual.
You can't use "a" or "an" with a plural noun. I changed it to "New Year's" because the season/holiday is generally understood. Personally I never say "New Year's holiday" I just say "New Year's"
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Really well done! Your contractions were great, the corrections were due to tense considerations. It was hard to correct for me because the mistakes you made were really subtle and I couldn't come up with reasons why they didn't feel right. Most of these corrections are merely to sound more like a native
This New Year Holidays This New Year's Holiday This New Year's Holidays "The holidays" refers to the end of year when we have Christmas and New Year's. So you should say "Holidays" if you're referring to all the days off around the end of the year, or "Holiday" if you're referring to one vacation alone. Th |
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