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This is what I love to do
I love playing sports, I enjoy all physical activities , like football, basketball, running, walk and crossfit.
If the money wasn't important, I would like to be a dog walker, I love animals, especially dogs.
I have two dogs, their names are Margha and Moro, whom my girlfriend and I adopted three years ago.
Me encanta practicar deportes; disfruto de todas las actividades físicas, como el fútbol, el baloncesto, correr, caminar y el crossfit.
Si el dinero no fuera importante, me gustaría pasear perros. Me encantan los animales, especialmente los perros.
Tengo dos perros, Margha y Moro, a quienes mi novia y yo adoptamos hace tres años.
This is what I love to do
I love playing sports, I enjoy all physical activities , like football, basketball, running, walk and crossfit.
If the money wasn't important, I would like to be a dog walker, I love animals, especially dogs.
You can just say "if money wasn't important", and contract "I would" to "I'd". Also, in English, it's smoother to say "I love animals, especially dogs" as its own sentence, rather than joining it on at the end.
I have two dogs, their names are Margha and Moro, whom my girlfriend and I adopted three years ago.
In English, it's more natural for the wording to be ", and my girlfriend and I adopted them three years ago." We don't really use "whom" much anymore, it's older English, and used more in an academic setting.
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This was really good overall, you know the vocabulary and English grammar well, however sometimes word order could be better.
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I love playing sports, I enjoy all physical activities , like football, basketball, running, walk and crossfit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If the money wasn't important, I would like to be a dog walker, I love animals, especially dogs. If the money wasn't important, I would like to be a dog walker, I love animals, especially dogs. You can just say "if money wasn't important", and contract "I would" to "I'd". Also, in English, it's smoother to say "I love animals, especially dogs" as its own sentence, rather than joining it on at the end. |
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I have two dogs, their names are Margha and Moro, whom my girlfriend and I adopted three years ago. I have two dogs, their names are Margha and Moro, whom my girlfriend and I adopted three years ago. In English, it's more natural for the wording to be ", and my girlfriend and I adopted them three years ago." We don't really use "whom" much anymore, it's older English, and used more in an academic setting. |
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