This is my first post on LangCorrect

heatedcanine

Nov. 1, 2019

This is my first post on LangCorrect

Hi,
this is my first post on here.
I'm Heated Canine, although capital letters and the space are not allowed to create a login name now.
I like to eat hot-dogs.
I want to eat like Kobayashi.

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kapnCrunch

Hi,

this is my first post on here. ¶

I'm Heated Canine, although capital letters and ~~the~~ spaces are not longer allowed to create a login name ~~now.~~ .¶

I like to eat hot- dogs. ¶

"hot dogs" is two words.

I want to eat like Kobayashi.

jamie

I'm Heated Canine, although capital letters and the space are not allowed ~~to create a~~in the login name (now/better:anymore). ¶

jamie

Nov. 8, 2019

I'm Heated Canine, although capital letters and the space are not allowed ~~to create a~~in the login name (now/better:anymore). ¶

Sorry I forgot this: 'the space' should be 'spaces'

elmin

this is my first post on here. ¶

"on here" is common in casual conversation but wouldn't sound right in a formal situation.

I like to eat hot- dogs. ¶

Usually we don't put a hyphen for hot t

zinnia

This is my first post on LangCorrect.

Hi,

tThis is my first post on here. ¶

I'm Heated Canine, although capital letters and ~~the~~ spaces are not allowed to create a login name now. ¶

I want to eat like Kobayashi.

I like to eat hot- dogs. ¶

Feedback

I am guessing that Kobayashi is a winner in hot dog eating contests.

masemune

This is my first post on LangCorrect

Hi,

this is my first post on here.

I'm Heated Canine, although capital letters and ~~the~~ spaces are no~~t allowed to create~~ longer a llo~~gin name now. ¶~~
wed in usernames.

We were able to put more than one space before, so I changed it to plural form. It also flows better keeping the plurality the same.

I like to eat hot-dogs.

I want to eat like Kobayashi.

Feedback

1) About the spaces and capital letters in usernames, that was a problem because people would forget the case sensitivity on their usernames... making them unable to login. However, I do have a solution to this problem via "nicknames". You can change the display name shown on the site, but the username to login would still be your original one.

2) Can you tell me a little bit more about Kobayashi. Is he a famous person who can eat many hotdogs?

heatedcanine

Nov. 2, 2019

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Takeru_Kobayashi

Kobayashi is rather a thin Japanese guy who won many competition titles of how-many-hot-dogs-(or other food such as pizzas and humblers)-you-can-eat-in-a-certain-period-of -time against a lot of huge and fat competitors in the US.
Everyone was astonished by his very fast eating behavior and wondered where those food was gone and disappeared into because his body was quite thin. It was really very fast!
It seemed miracle!

heatedcanine

Nov. 2, 2019

Thank you for the corrections and comment.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Takeru_Kobayashi

is the reference web site.
The line break didn't work somehow.

masemune

Nov. 2, 2019

He sounds like a total badass. He kind of reminds me of another famous Japanese person who can eat so much. From what I remember she was very famous on YouTube, and she always ate insane amounts of food.

Maybe this sounds familiar to you. I'll read more about Takeru later tonight :)

masemune

Nov. 2, 2019

I'll push the line break fix sometime tomorrow

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