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This is my first piece of English writing
This is my first piece of English writing. I plan to keep it simple with some basic sentences.
It's sunny today, But there's a faint haze in the air -- I can just feel it.
I thought about going for a walk nearby , but with so much work waiting for me,I had to abandon the idea.
Everyone is busy balancing work and life. I am also preparing for an exam as well, and I hope to achieve a good score through my hard work.
cheer myself on and strive my goal !
This is my first piece of English writing.
I plan to keep it simple with some basic sentences.
It's sunny today, Bbut there's a faint haze in the air --
I can just feel it.
I thought about going for a walk nearby , but with so much work waiting for me, I had to abandon the idea.
No space before a comma, one space after a comma
Everyone is busy balancing work and life.
I am also preparing for an exam as well, and I hope to achievereceive/get/earn a good score through my hard work.
Also = as well. Using both is redundant.
I am cheering myself on ands I strive towards my goal !
The original sentence was a bit incomplete
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yesterday
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This is my first piece of English writing |
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This is my first piece of English writing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I plan to keep it simple with some basic sentences. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's sunny today, But there's a faint haze in the air -- It's sunny today, |
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I can just feel it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thought about going for a walk nearby , but with so much work waiting for me,I had to abandon the idea. I thought about going for a walk nearby No space before a comma, one space after a comma |
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cheer myself on and strive my goal ! I am cheering myself on a The original sentence was a bit incomplete |
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Everyone is busy balancing work and life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am also preparing for an exam as well, and I hope to achieve a good score through my hard work. I am also preparing for an exam Also = as well. Using both is redundant. |
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