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selenguney

Sept. 18, 2024

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This is just a trial

Hello, first of all, this is my first trial. I would like to improve my writing skills because ı am quite bad about that. In the future, ı want to be writer who writes about short story. Yes ı am not sure how may ı improve myself but ı am sure firstly, ı should start to write.

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This is just a trial

Hello, first of all, this is my first trial.

I would like to improve my writing skills because ı am quite bad about that it.

You could also say, "I would like to improve my writing skills because they are quite bad."

In the future, ı want to be writer who writes about short story.

Yes ı am not sure how may ıI can improve myself, but ı am sure that, firstly, ı should start to write.

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Great job. I can tell that you are a writer! Keep going :)

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selenguney

Sept. 20, 2024

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Thank you so much for your feedback.

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eglantine14

Sept. 20, 2024

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You’re welcome! :)

This is just a trial


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Hello, first of all, this is my first trial.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would like to improve my writing skills because ı am quite bad about that.


I would like to improve my writing skills because ı am quite bad about that it.

You could also say, "I would like to improve my writing skills because they are quite bad."

In the future, ı want to be writer who writes about short story.


In the future, ı want to be writer who writes about short story.

Yes ı am not sure how may ı improve myself but ı am sure firstly, ı should start to write.


Yes ı am not sure how may ıI can improve myself, but ı am sure that, firstly, ı should start to write.

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