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slevenstrange123

Dec. 13, 2024

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This is a TOEFL IBT Academic discussion essay practice

Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides freedom to learn in your own pace that is comfortable and effective, but we should not overlook the importance of teacher's guidance in some complicated subjects or topics. In my opinion, self-study should compliment the lecture taught by teacher rather than replacing it. Subjects such as mathematic and chemistry are perfect examples to express how teachers make complicated things easier. Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, it can confuse or misguide you. However, the flexibility and vast resources on internet provide optimal environment for students who do not have budget to afford privet lessons. In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn on your comfort and do not miss essentials of the topics.

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This is a TOEFL IBT Academic discussion essay practice

Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides the freedom to learn inat your own pace, that is comfortable and effective, but we should not overlook the importance of teacher's guidance inwith some complicated subjects or topics.

In my opinion, self-study should compliement thea lecture taught by a teacher rather than replacinge it.

Subjects such as mathematics and chemistry are perfect examples to expressshow how teachers make complicated things easier.

"make complicated things easier" can also be "simplify complex topics"

Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, ithey can confuse or misguide you.

"it" doesn't feel wrong here, but "they" (the videos) seems better.

However, the flexibility and vast quantity of resources on the internet provide the optimal environment for students who do not have the budget to afford privatet lessons.

In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn onat your comfort and do nowon't miss the essentials of the topics.

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langcrnl

Dec. 15, 2024

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on second look, in the first sentence I like the original "in some complicated subjects or topics" more. Can't see how to edit on this site.

This is a TOEFL IBT Academic discussion essay practice


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Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides freedom to learn in your own pace that is comfortable and effective, but we should not overlook the importance of teacher's guidance in some complicated subjects or topics.


Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides the freedom to learn inat your own pace, that is comfortable and effective, but we should not overlook the importance of teacher's guidance inwith some complicated subjects or topics.

In my opinion, self-study should compliment the lecture taught by teacher rather than replacing it.


In my opinion, self-study should compliement thea lecture taught by a teacher rather than replacinge it.

Subjects such as mathematic and chemistry are perfect examples to express how teachers make complicated things easier.


Subjects such as mathematics and chemistry are perfect examples to expressshow how teachers make complicated things easier.

"make complicated things easier" can also be "simplify complex topics"

Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, it can confuse or misguide you.


Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, ithey can confuse or misguide you.

"it" doesn't feel wrong here, but "they" (the videos) seems better.

However, the flexibility and vast resources on internet provide optimal environment for students who do not have budget to afford privet lessons.


However, the flexibility and vast quantity of resources on the internet provide the optimal environment for students who do not have the budget to afford privatet lessons.

In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn on your comfort and do not miss essentials of the topics.


In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn onat your comfort and do nowon't miss the essentials of the topics.

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