Dec. 13, 2024
This is a TOEFL IBT Academic discussion essay practice
Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides freedom to learn in your own pace that is comfortable and effective, but we should not overlook the importance of teacher's guidance in some complicated subjects or topics. In my opinion, self-study should compliment the lecture taught by teacher rather than replacing it. Subjects such as mathematic and chemistry are perfect examples to express how teachers make complicated things easier. Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, it can confuse or misguide you. However, the flexibility and vast resources on internet provide optimal environment for students who do not have budget to afford privet lessons. In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn on your comfort and do not miss essentials of the topics.
Studying alone may seem alluring, as it provides freedom to learn inat your own pace that is comfortable and effective, but. However, we should not overlook the importance of a teacher's guidance infor some complicated subjects or topics.
In my opinion, self-study should compliement the lecture taught by a teacher, rather than replacing it.
"Compliment" = A courteous remark to or about someone or something.
"Complement" = When something completes something else in some way.
This is a common spelling mistake for native writers too, as the words sound exactly the same!
Subjects such as mathematics and chemistry arprovide perfect examples to expressfor how teachers can make complicated things easier.
Sometimes "Mathematics" and "Chemistry" may be capitalised, but there are different opinions on this.
Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, ithey can confuse or misguide you.
"videos" is plural, so "it" becoming "they" flows more smoothly in this case.
However, the flexibility and vastness of resources on the internet provides an optimal environment for students who do not have the budget to afford privatet lessons.
In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficiideal as you can learn onat your comfort and do noown pace and won't miss any essentials of thea topics.
"more beneficial" is not incorrect, but the word "ideal" conveys the same message more clearly and fluently.
"on your comfort" = not an expression in english
"at your own pace" = conveys the same message and is a commonly used expression :)
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Great work! Your sentences are fluid and easy to read. Just some minor edits to help it sound more natural for a native reader.
This is a TOEFL IBT Academic discussion essay practice
Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides the freedom to learn inat your own pace, that is comfortable and effective, but we should not overlook the importance of teacher's guidance inwith some complicated subjects or topics.
In my opinion, self-study should compliement thea lecture taught by a teacher rather than replacinge it.
Subjects such as mathematics and chemistry are perfect examples to expressshow how teachers make complicated things easier.
"make complicated things easier" can also be "simplify complex topics"
Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, ithey can confuse or misguide you.
"it" doesn't feel wrong here, but "they" (the videos) seems better.
However, the flexibility and vast quantity of resources on the internet provide the optimal environment for students who do not have the budget to afford privatet lessons.
In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn onat your comfort and do nowon't miss the essentials of the topics.
Dec. 15, 2024
on second look, in the first sentence I like the original "in some complicated subjects or topics" more. Can't see how to edit on this site.
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This is a TOEFL IBT Academic discussion essay practice This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides freedom to learn in your own pace that is comfortable and effective, but we should not overlook the importance of teacher's guidance in some complicated subjects or topics. Studying alone may seem alluring as it provides the freedom to learn Studying alone may seem alluring, as it provides freedom to learn |
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In my opinion, self-study should compliment the lecture taught by teacher rather than replacing it. In my opinion, self-study should compl In my opinion, self-study should compl "Compliment" = A courteous remark to or about someone or something. "Complement" = When something completes something else in some way. This is a common spelling mistake for native writers too, as the words sound exactly the same! |
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Subjects such as mathematic and chemistry are perfect examples to express how teachers make complicated things easier. Subjects such as mathematics and chemistry are perfect examples to "make complicated things easier" can also be "simplify complex topics" Subjects such as mathematics and chemistry Sometimes "Mathematics" and "Chemistry" may be capitalised, but there are different opinions on this. |
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Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, it can confuse or misguide you. Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, "it" doesn't feel wrong here, but "they" (the videos) seems better. Specifically, when you watch videos from YouTube about quantum physics or covalent connections between non-metals, "videos" is plural, so "it" becoming "they" flows more smoothly in this case. |
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However, the flexibility and vast resources on internet provide optimal environment for students who do not have budget to afford privet lessons. However, the flexibility and vast quantity of resources on the internet provide the optimal environment for students who do not have the budget to afford private However, the flexibility and vastness of resources on the internet provides an optimal environment for students who do not have the budget to afford private |
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In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn on your comfort and do not miss essentials of the topics. In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is more beneficial as you can learn In conclusion, getting help while self-studying is "more beneficial" is not incorrect, but the word "ideal" conveys the same message more clearly and fluently. "on your comfort" = not an expression in english "at your own pace" = conveys the same message and is a commonly used expression :) |
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