yesterday
this first tring
hi
how are you? I live in Jordan
I have 43 years old.
I sell toys in my shoping
I need improve my language English
thank you
مرحبا
كيف حالكم
انا اعيش في الاردن وعمري 43سنة
ابيع الالعاب في محلي
احتاج الى تحسين لغتي الانجليزية
شكرا لكم
thisThe first tringy.
I'm not sure if this is what you meant but I'm guessing it is!
hi
¶Hi! How are you?
h
Capitalise the beginning of your sentences!
"Hi" and "How are you?" should be two different sentences, or you could say "Hi, how are you?".
I live in Jordan.
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I haveam 43 years old.
If you want this to be one sentence, you can say, "I live in Jordan and I'm 43 years old."
When stating your age, say "I am", don't use the verb 'have'.
I sell toys in my shoping
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I need to improve my language English
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t
Thank you.
"Shopping" is a verb! A shop is the place.
When you use 'need', place 'to' before what you need to do!
Saying just "English" is enough! If you are gonna say 'language', put it after 'English', so 'the English language'.
Feedback
Overall good for A1! Writing is really difficult, and you did well. At A1, you can keep your sentences short.
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this first tring
I'm not sure if this is what you meant but I'm guessing it is! |
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hi how are you?
Capitalise the beginning of your sentences! "Hi" and "How are you?" should be two different sentences, or you could say "Hi, how are you?". |
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I live in Jordan I have 43 years old. I live in Jordan. If you want this to be one sentence, you can say, "I live in Jordan and I'm 43 years old." When stating your age, say "I am", don't use the verb 'have'. |
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I sell toys in my shoping I need improve my language English thank you I sell toys in my shop "Shopping" is a verb! A shop is the place. When you use 'need', place 'to' before what you need to do! Saying just "English" is enough! If you are gonna say 'language', put it after 'English', so 'the English language'. |
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