June 3, 2025
This day
Today was boring, becacuse I had to do my school homework all day, i didn't finish it, but still i will have all week, after i watched movies with my mom and ate food. I need tips on how to improve my writing skills.
This day
Today was boring, becacuse I had to do my school homework all day, i. I didn't finish it, but I still i will have all week, after i to do so. Afterwards I watched movies with my mom and ate food.
This day
Today was boring, becacuse I had to do my school homework all day, i. I didn't finish it, but stI will i wstill have allthe rest of the week, a. After iwards, I watched movies with my mom and ate food.
I need tips on how to improve my writing skills.
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Your writing is fine, just remember to capitalize "I." Natural breaks in between what you're saying is the easiest way to know when to separate sentences, if you're having trouble with that.
This oday
Nadie dice “This Day”. Siempre utiliza “today” como lo hiciste en tu texto.
Today was boring, becacus since I had to do my school homework all day, i didn't finish it, but still i will have all week, after i. I still have all week to do it tho, so I didn't finish it. After that, I watched some movies with my mom and ate some food.
Nunca vas a especificar que tu tarea es de tu escuela “school homework” porque es obvio. El “tho” que puse es la versión informal de “Although”. Si quisieras hacer la oración formal dirías: Although I didn’t finish it since I still have all week to do it.
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Algunos tips que tengo son que te pegues a la cabeza que el “I” siempre va a estar capitalizado porque en todos tus párrafos lo has tenido en minúscula. También te recordaría separar tus oraciones. Cada vez que hables de un tema nuevo pon un punto, y si te importa mucho usar los símbolos correctos, cada vez que tu oración empiece con una “clause” dependiente vas a poner una coma antes de la “clause” independiente. Si no me entendiste, buscaría un video sobre el tema. Se llama “Dependent and Independent Clauses”. Si se te hace muy difícil, no me preocuparía mucho, pero haría prioridad leer cosas en inglés para que empieces a reconocer las estructuras de las oraciones solo.
June 3, 2025
Ahora que lo pienso, tu título debería ser My Day, no Today. Perdón por la confusión.
This dDay
Title case requires first and last words to be capitalized in titles.
Today was boring, becacuse I had to do my school homework all day, i. I didn't finish it, but stI will i wstill have all week, a. After i, I watched movies with my mom and ate food.
One simple way to think of it is to make each complete thought its own sentence. One way to keep it as one sentence could be:
Today was boring because I had to do my school homework all day; even though I didn't finish it, I watched movies with my mom and ate food, since I still have all week.
I need tips on how to improve my writing skills.
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You're doing well! From this entry here, maybe one thing to practice is using shorter sentences. I can tell exactly what you're trying to say.
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This day This Title case requires first and last words to be capitalized in titles. T Nadie dice “This Day”. Siempre utiliza “today” como lo hiciste en tu texto. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This day |
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Today was boring, becacuse I had to do my school homework all day, i didn't finish it, but still i will have all week, after i watched movies with my mom and ate food. Today was boring One simple way to think of it is to make each complete thought its own sentence. One way to keep it as one sentence could be: Today was boring because I had to do my school homework all day; even though I didn't finish it, I watched movies with my mom and ate food, since I still have all week. Today was boring Nunca vas a especificar que tu tarea es de tu escuela “school homework” porque es obvio. El “tho” que puse es la versión informal de “Although”. Si quisieras hacer la oración formal dirías: Although I didn’t finish it since I still have all week to do it. Today was boring, beca Today was boring, beca |
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