Dec. 17, 2021
I’m so much into writing journals these days and after thorough search, I’ve found a perfect site for me! I’ve always wanted my writing to be checked by natives. Actually, I have one Canadian friend who will be willing to check what I write, but I didn’t want to bother her everyday since I’m determined to write journals almost everyday. I’m thrilled to have found this site. God bless to all who give valuable time for me!
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I’m so much into writing journals these days, and after thorough research, I’ve found a perfect site for me!
Saying "I'm so much into..." is nit technically incorrect, but native English speakers would usually just shorten it down to "I'm so into...". They would remove the "much".
A comma would be placed before "and" because this conjunction is combining two independent clauses.
The word research would be a better fit here instead of search. Thorough is an adjective so it must be paired with a noun (research), or if search is kept, it must be changed to searching, and thorough must be changed to thoroughly (an adverb).
Very good use of contractions!
I’ve always wanted my writing to be checked by natives.
Actually, I have one Canadian friend who will be willing to check what I write, but I didn’t want to bother her every day since I’m determined to write journals almost every day.
Both uses of "every day" should have a space between every and day.
I’m thrilled to have found this site.
God bless to all who give valuable time for me!
This is another instance where this is technically correct. However, native speakers would not speak in such a clunky sort of way. They would instead say something like: "God bless all who have helped me" or "God bless all who have given their valuable time to me."
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Your use of contractions is very good! Your writing is very good, too. This few errors you had were mostly stylistic issues. Keep up the good work! :)
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I’m so much into writing journals these days and after through search, I’ve found a perfect site for me! |
I’ve always wanted my writing to be checked by natives. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Actually, I have one Canadian friend who will be willing to check what I write, but I didn’t want to bother her everyday since I’m determined to write journals almost everyday. Actually, I have one Canadian friend who will be willing to check what I write, but I didn’t want to bother her every day since I’m determined to write journals almost every day. Both uses of "every day" should have a space between every and day. |
I’m thrilled to have found this site. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
God bless to all who give valuable time for me! God bless to all who give valuable time for me! This is another instance where this is technically correct. However, native speakers would not speak in such a clunky sort of way. They would instead say something like: "God bless all who have helped me" or "God bless all who have given their valuable time to me." |
I’m so much into writing journals these days and after thorough search, I’ve found a perfect site for me! I’m so much into writing journals these days, and after thorough research, I’ve found a perfect site for me! Saying "I'm so much into..." is nit technically incorrect, but native English speakers would usually just shorten it down to "I'm so into...". They would remove the "much". A comma would be placed before "and" because this conjunction is combining two independent clauses. The word research would be a better fit here instead of search. Thorough is an adjective so it must be paired with a noun (research), or if search is kept, it must be changed to searching, and thorough must be changed to thoroughly (an adverb). Very good use of contractions! |
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