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skeshech

June 22, 2025

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Third Day of Intense Study

Today is a third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days. Today I had a lot practice of vocabulary. Now I know 20 more words but I am going to learn more tomorrow. To be honest this three days was really hard to me. I used to sleep a lot but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I waste aroud 5 hours to study. One more reason to get up early in discipline. I want to start to work after this week. Work will take 4-6 hours. So I will not have many free time.
Today read news and learnt new words. Next I choose to watch a serial. Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow

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Third Dday of Iintense Sstudy

Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

Today, I hadid a lot of practice of vocabulary.

Now I know 20 more words but I am going to learn more tomorrow.

To be honest thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

I used to sleep a lot but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I wastestudy for around 5 hours to study.

One more reason to get up early in discipland get into a routine.

I want to start to work after this week.

Work will take 4-6 hours.

So I will not have manyuch free time.

Today I read the news and learnt some new words.

Next I choose to watched a serial.

Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow

Third Day of Intense Study

Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

you could also say that it is "Day 3"

Today I had a lot practice ofwith vocabulary.

You could also say "Today I had a lot of vocabulary practice."

Now I know 20 more words, but I am going to learn more tomorrow.

the comma helps combine an independent and dependent clause here

To be honest, thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

if the thing is plural, it's "were"

if it is a single one, then it's "was"

the verb applies to the plural noun "days," so it's "were"

I used to sleep a lot, but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I wastespend around 5 hours to study.

There could also be a comma placed after "challenge," but it isn't needed for readability.

The comma before the conjunction "but" is necessary to combine the two main clauses.

Also, "waste" implies that you don't believe in what you are doing, while "spend" avoids that issue

One more reason to get up early in discipline.

I want to start to work after this week.for 4-6 hours per day after this week, so I will not have much free time.

I combined three sentences here, since they were short and covered the same topic. Such a revision isn't entirely obligatory, but creatively combining short sentences about similar ideas can improve reader engagement. Also, it is "much" free time, as "many" refers to a plural thing.

Work will take 4-6 hours.

So I will not have many free time.

Today I read the news and learnted new words.

past tense of verbs usually uses "ed-" as a suffix

Next, I choose to watch a seriales.

Since it is past tense, it's "chose."

Also, a TV show with multiple episodes is usually referred to as "a series."

Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow.

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Well done. I hope you keep making progress toward your C1 goal.

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skeshech

June 23, 2025

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thank you!!

Third Day of Intense Study

Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

Today, I had a lot practice of vocabulary practice.

More natural phrasing

Now I know 20 more words, but I am going to learn more tomorrow.

To be honest, thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

Three = plural -> these, were

I used to sleep a lot, but with this challenge, I have to wake up earlier because I wastespend around 5 hours to study.

"Wasting" time means nothing of value was gained (it is negative in meaning). Studying is an excellent use of your time, so I would say "spend" or "pass" time.

One more reason to get up early into be disciplined.

Alternative: One more reason to get up early for this discipline (if you want to refer to your study of English as a discipline)

I want to start to work after this week.

This is fine, but a more natural alternative would be "I want to start working next week." Both are a little ambiguous, though, as we don't know what work you are referring to (e.g., it could be work at a job, work in your home, work on your studies).

WThe work will take 4-6 hours.

So I will not have manyuch free time.

"Many" is for things that are discrete and countable (many apples). Things that are considered difficult to count need "much" instead (much sand, much time).

Today I read the news and learnt new words.

NextThen I choose to watch a show/seriales.

"Next" is better reserved for speaking about the future. For recounting a story, stick to "then."

Serial is an adjective; what you mean is series. You can also use the general term "show" which can be basically any TV program that isn't a movie or the news.

Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow

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Good job

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skeshech

June 22, 2025

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thank you!

Third Day of Intense Study

Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

Today I had a lot practice of vocabulary practice.

Or: "Today I practiced a lot of vocabulary."

Now I know 20 more words but I am going to learn more tomorrow.

To be honest, thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

I used to sleep a lot, but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I wastestudy for around 5 hours to study(a day).

or: "...wake up earlier because I take around 5 hours (a day) to study/for studying."

"...take...for study(ing)." - Not wrong, but sounds a little awkward, especially with 'study/studying' being at the end of a sentence'

"...take...to study." - Connotation is a little negative. Implies that studying is something that requires 5 hours and the speaker is helpless to change it and doesn't like it. Similar tone to: "I have to study for a whole 5 hours a day." (tone: frustrated, upset).

One more reason to get up early ins discipline.

I want to start to work after this week.

Work will take 4-6 hours.

So I will not have manyuch free time.

Combine with previous sentence: "Work will take four-to-six hours, so I will not have much free time." - MUCH more natural.

Today I read the news and learnt new words.

Next I choose to watch a serial.

Past tense.

If you meant present tense, "Next, I'm going to choose a serial to watch." or "Next, I decided on a serial to watch." "Next, I watched a serial." "Then I chose a serial to watch for next time."

(The last sentence implies that you didn't watch the show yet, but you will next time you study.)

"serial" is not wrong, but is most commonly used to specifically describe the genre of show the includes things like soap operas, CSI, or other "daytime drama" TV. You can use "show" or "TV series" or just "series" for a more general word, if that's not what you meant. (Note: "series" can also apply to book series.)

Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow

Feedback

Good job! I can see improvement. Don't burn yourself out, though! It's important to get enough sleep and take care of your body.

Best wishes! I hope you continue to have fun with your studies!

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skeshech

June 22, 2025

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thank you so much! :)

Today is a third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.


Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

you could also say that it is "Day 3"

Today is athe third day of my little challenge: I am going to improve my English skills from B1 to C1 in 60 days.

Today I had a lot practice of vocabulary.


Today I had a lot practice of vocabulary practice.

Or: "Today I practiced a lot of vocabulary."

Today, I had a lot practice of vocabulary practice.

More natural phrasing

Today I had a lot practice ofwith vocabulary.

You could also say "Today I had a lot of vocabulary practice."

Today, I hadid a lot of practice of vocabulary.

Now I know 20 more words but I am going to learn more tomorrow.


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Now I know 20 more words, but I am going to learn more tomorrow.

Now I know 20 more words, but I am going to learn more tomorrow.

the comma helps combine an independent and dependent clause here

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To be honest this three days was really hard to me.


To be honest, thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

To be honest, thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

Three = plural -> these, were

To be honest, thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

if the thing is plural, it's "were" if it is a single one, then it's "was" the verb applies to the plural noun "days," so it's "were"

To be honest thisese three days wasere really hard tofor me.

I used to sleep a lot but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I waste aroud 5 hours to study.


I used to sleep a lot, but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I wastestudy for around 5 hours to study(a day).

or: "...wake up earlier because I take around 5 hours (a day) to study/for studying." "...take...for study(ing)." - Not wrong, but sounds a little awkward, especially with 'study/studying' being at the end of a sentence' "...take...to study." - Connotation is a little negative. Implies that studying is something that requires 5 hours and the speaker is helpless to change it and doesn't like it. Similar tone to: "I have to study for a whole 5 hours a day." (tone: frustrated, upset).

I used to sleep a lot, but with this challenge, I have to wake up earlier because I wastespend around 5 hours to study.

"Wasting" time means nothing of value was gained (it is negative in meaning). Studying is an excellent use of your time, so I would say "spend" or "pass" time.

I used to sleep a lot, but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I wastespend around 5 hours to study.

There could also be a comma placed after "challenge," but it isn't needed for readability. The comma before the conjunction "but" is necessary to combine the two main clauses. Also, "waste" implies that you don't believe in what you are doing, while "spend" avoids that issue

I used to sleep a lot but with this challenge I have to wake up earlier because I wastestudy for around 5 hours to study.

One more reason to get up early in discipline.


One more reason to get up early ins discipline.

One more reason to get up early into be disciplined.

Alternative: One more reason to get up early for this discipline (if you want to refer to your study of English as a discipline)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One more reason to get up early in discipland get into a routine.

I want to start to work after this week.


I want to start to work after this week.

I want to start to work after this week.

This is fine, but a more natural alternative would be "I want to start working next week." Both are a little ambiguous, though, as we don't know what work you are referring to (e.g., it could be work at a job, work in your home, work on your studies).

I want to start to work after this week.for 4-6 hours per day after this week, so I will not have much free time.

I combined three sentences here, since they were short and covered the same topic. Such a revision isn't entirely obligatory, but creatively combining short sentences about similar ideas can improve reader engagement. Also, it is "much" free time, as "many" refers to a plural thing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Work will take 4-6 hours.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

WThe work will take 4-6 hours.

Work will take 4-6 hours.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So I will not have many free time.


So I will not have manyuch free time.

Combine with previous sentence: "Work will take four-to-six hours, so I will not have much free time." - MUCH more natural.

So I will not have manyuch free time.

"Many" is for things that are discrete and countable (many apples). Things that are considered difficult to count need "much" instead (much sand, much time).

So I will not have many free time.

So I will not have manyuch free time.

Today read news and learnt new words.


Today I read the news and learnt new words.

Today I read the news and learnt new words.

Today I read the news and learnted new words.

past tense of verbs usually uses "ed-" as a suffix

Today I read the news and learnt some new words.

Next I choose to watch a serial.


Next I choose to watch a serial.

Past tense. If you meant present tense, "Next, I'm going to choose a serial to watch." or "Next, I decided on a serial to watch." "Next, I watched a serial." "Then I chose a serial to watch for next time." (The last sentence implies that you didn't watch the show yet, but you will next time you study.) "serial" is not wrong, but is most commonly used to specifically describe the genre of show the includes things like soap operas, CSI, or other "daytime drama" TV. You can use "show" or "TV series" or just "series" for a more general word, if that's not what you meant. (Note: "series" can also apply to book series.)

NextThen I choose to watch a show/seriales.

"Next" is better reserved for speaking about the future. For recounting a story, stick to "then." Serial is an adjective; what you mean is series. You can also use the general term "show" which can be basically any TV program that isn't a movie or the news.

Next, I choose to watch a seriales.

Since it is past tense, it's "chose." Also, a TV show with multiple episodes is usually referred to as "a series."

Next I choose to watched a serial.

Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow.

Now I have so many words that I will learn tomorrow

Third Day of Intense Study


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