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Today the topic that I reading and listening was about of the play when you were a children. The word or phrase that learning today was hidey-hole, I liked so much this word, never I listen this word.
In theme of comprehension I feel good but my vocabulary is slow and just I know a few words :(
Im so excited for looking my progress in one month

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Third day

Today the topic that I reading and listeninged to was about of the play when you were a children.

You can also say "what play was like as a child" instead of "the play when you were a children." This might sound more natural :)

The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole,. I liked so much this word, never I listen this wthis word so much! I have never heard it beforde.

In themeerms of comprehension, I feel good, but my vocabulary is slow, and just II only know a few words :(

In English, we often say "in terms of" when we are defining the extent to which something occurred (for example, you might say, "I felt good about my audition in terms of how well I sang, but I do not think I am going to get the role because there were many other talented people there").

I'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month!

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This is great work overall. I'm also excited to see how you progress!

Today the topic that I reading about and listening was about of the play when you were aed to was how children play.

A shorter sentence helps to focus on the main point.

The word or phrase that I learninged today was "hidey-hole,." I liked so much this word, never I listen this w so much. I never heard it beforde.

Word order is different in your native language and English.

In theme of feel good about my comprehension I feel good, but my vocabulary is slowlimited, and I just I know a few words :(

I'm so excited for lookto see my progress in one month.¶
I'm looking forward to see
ing my progress in one month.

Two ways to say the same thing,

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To practice English word order, write an English sentence on paper, and cut it up into pieces with 1-4 words on each piece. Then put the pieces in order. For example

The word or phrase / that I learned / today was "hidey-hole." / I liked this word / so much. /I never heard / it before.

Today, the topic that I was reading and listening to was about of the play when you were a children.

(1) Punctuation. (2) verbs are in the wrong tense. (3) Use only about. (4) Children is plural, but here you mean singular

The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole,. I liked so much this word, never I listen this w so much, I had never heard it beforde.

Missing subject.
The word order makes it confusing.

In themeerms of comprehension, I feel good, but my vocabulary is slow, and I just I know a few words :(

Phrasing with the "In terms of ..."
Word order also.

I'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month

Missing apostrophe.
Phrasing again.

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You’re expressing your ideas clearly, which is great! Most of the issues are small grammar points like verb tense, word order, and choosing the right word. Once those are fixed, your writing flows naturally. Keep practicing! You’re already on the right track.

Third day

Today the topic that I reading and listeninged to was about of the play when you were aplay about children.

The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole, I liked so much this word, never I listenthis word so much, as I'd never heard this word before.

InOn the theme of comprehension I feel good, but my vocabulary is slowlimited and I just I know a few words :(

I'm so excited forto looking at my progress in one month

Third day

Today the topic that I was reading and listening to was about of the play when you were a children.

The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole,. I liked so much this word, never I listen this word so much, but I've never this word before.

In themeerms of comprehension I feel good but my vocabulary is slow and I just I know a few words :(

I'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month.

Feedback

Good luck! Hidey-hole is a fun word to say :)

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Today the topic that I reading and listening was about of the play when you were a children.


Today the topic that I was reading and listening to was about of the play when you were a children.

Today the topic that I reading and listeninged to was about of the play when you were aplay about children.

Today, the topic that I was reading and listening to was about of the play when you were a children.

(1) Punctuation. (2) verbs are in the wrong tense. (3) Use only about. (4) Children is plural, but here you mean singular

Today the topic that I reading about and listening was about of the play when you were aed to was how children play.

A shorter sentence helps to focus on the main point.

Today the topic that I reading and listeninged to was about of the play when you were a children.

You can also say "what play was like as a child" instead of "the play when you were a children." This might sound more natural :)

The word or phrase that learning today was hidey-hole, I liked so much this word, never I listen this word.


The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole,. I liked so much this word, never I listen this word so much, but I've never this word before.

The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole, I liked so much this word, never I listenthis word so much, as I'd never heard this word before.

The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole,. I liked so much this word, never I listen this w so much, I had never heard it beforde.

Missing subject. The word order makes it confusing.

The word or phrase that I learninged today was "hidey-hole,." I liked so much this word, never I listen this w so much. I never heard it beforde.

Word order is different in your native language and English.

The word or phrase that I learninged today was hidey-hole,. I liked so much this word, never I listen this wthis word so much! I have never heard it beforde.

In theme of comprehension I feel good but my vocabulary is slow and just I know a few words :(


In themeerms of comprehension I feel good but my vocabulary is slow and I just I know a few words :(

InOn the theme of comprehension I feel good, but my vocabulary is slowlimited and I just I know a few words :(

In themeerms of comprehension, I feel good, but my vocabulary is slow, and I just I know a few words :(

Phrasing with the "In terms of ..." Word order also.

In theme of feel good about my comprehension I feel good, but my vocabulary is slowlimited, and I just I know a few words :(

In themeerms of comprehension, I feel good, but my vocabulary is slow, and just II only know a few words :(

In English, we often say "in terms of" when we are defining the extent to which something occurred (for example, you might say, "I felt good about my audition in terms of how well I sang, but I do not think I am going to get the role because there were many other talented people there").

In theme of comprehension I feel good but my vocabulary is slow and just a few words :(


Im so excited for looking my progress in one month


I'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month.

I'm so excited forto looking at my progress in one month

I'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month

Missing apostrophe. Phrasing again.

I'm so excited for lookto see my progress in one month.¶
I'm looking forward to see
ing my progress in one month.

Two ways to say the same thing,

I'm so excited for lookingto see my progress in one month!

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