June 10, 2020
Things that make me happy
Drinking alcohol makes me happy every time.
I love drinking beer and sake with salty bar food which goes well with alcohol.
When I was younger, I didn’t like beer and was able to drink only sweet cocktail which is not too strong and juicy , but I longed to order beer at first because It seemed to be adult-ish for me, so I started trying to drink beer over 20 times as my older colleagues told me. This is how I got used to beer taste.
Eventually, I can’t drink sweet cocktail now, I rather became a beer lover.
I like talking with someone in my free time, It make me forget time. Taking with friends is absolutely fun, but also it’s so exciting to talk with strangers, since I can find something new and make new friends!
In my Instagram, there are lots of posts about cats and dogs, it’s also soothing me.
Things that make me happy
Drinking alcohol makes me happy every time.
When I was younger, I didn’t like beer and was able to drink only sweet cocktails which iswere not too strong and juicy , but I longed to order beer at first because Iit seemed to be adult-ish for me, so I started trying to drink beer over 20 times as my older colleagues told me.
This sentence is a bit tangled. I'm not sure what your older colleagues told you. Did they help you choose which beers to try?
This is how I got used to beerthe taste of beer.
Eventually, I can’t drink sweet cocktail now, I rather became a beer lover I became a beer lover, and now I can’t drink sweet cocktails.
I like talking with someone in my free time, Iit makes me forget time.
Taking with friends is absolutely fun, but also it’sit’s also so exciting to talk with strangers, since I can find something new and make new friends!
In my Instagram, there are lots of posts about cats and dogs, it’s also soothing to me.
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June 11, 2020
When I was younger, I didn’t like beer and was able to drink only sweet cocktails which iswere not too strong and juicy , but I longed to order beer at first because Iit seemed to be adult-ish for me, so I started trying to drink beer over 20 times as my older colleagues told me.
My older colleagues told me to try to drink beer more until you got used to!
June 11, 2020
Thank you:))
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Drinking alcohol makes me happy every time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love drinking beer and sake with salty bar food which goes well with alcohol. |
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When I was younger, I didn’t like beer and was able to drink only sweet cocktail which is not too strong and juicy , but I longed to order beer at first because It seemed to be adult-ish for me. |
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That is how I tried drinking beer over 20 times as my older colleagues told me and I got used to beer taste. |
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Eventually, I can’t drink sweet cocktail now, I rather became a beer lover. Eventually |
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I like talking with someone in my free time, It make me forget time. I like talking with someone in my free time, |
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Taking with friends is absolutely fun, but also it’s so exciting to talk with strangers, since I can find something new and make new friends! Taking with friends is absolutely fun, but |
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In my Instagram, there are lots of posts about cats and dogs, it’s also soothing me. In my Instagram, there are lots of posts about cats and dogs, it’s also soothing to me. |
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When I was younger, I didn’t like beer and was able to drink only sweet cocktail which is not too strong and juicy , but I longed to order beer at first because It seemed to be adult-ish for me, so I started trying to drink beer over 20 times as my older colleagues told me. When I was younger, I didn’t like beer and was able to drink only sweet cocktails which This sentence is a bit tangled. I'm not sure what your older colleagues told you. Did they help you choose which beers to try? |
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This is how I got used to beer taste. This is how I got used to |
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