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When I was in middle school I loved painting./I loved to paint.

My favorite artists inat that time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.

Were because you’re talking about a moment in the past

I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things like: "Anybody can paint" "Painting is useless" "Nobody cares about painting".

And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying english, music and writing.

I had lost mythe ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future wasfelt very dull for me.

Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and if you have discipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician.

Reading fictional books wouldn't save your from your death or gainmake you more money but you cry when you read your favorite stories.

Anybody can write a haiku, even a child can write a beatiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way like youyou can, this applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.

My first painting after three years is about a sunrise with a Van Gogh-inspired style.

I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become ian aeven better artist.

This haiku is inspired inby a song ofrom The Beattles:

My love for you smells like spring

Things that Aare Useless

When I was in middle school I loved to painting.

My favorite artists inat thate time wasere: Leonardo Da Vinci, Miguel Achelangelo, Vincent Van Gogh and Pablo Picasso.

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Now I had lost my ability andthe motivation for drawing and painting and; sometimes I feelt sad because my future was very dull for meI have no interest in a creative outlet.

If you're happy when you do something that you like, then it isn't useless.

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Things that Aare Useless

When I was in middle school, I loved painting.

My favorite artists inat that time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Achelangelo, Van Gogh and Picasso.

I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things to me like:, "Aanybody can paint," "Ppainting is useless," "Nnobody cares about painting"."

This is unfortunate. I'm sorry you were told these things.

And when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying eEnglish, music and writing.

I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting and sometimes I felt sad because my future wasould be very dull for me.

future perfect tense

But atnear the end of high school I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whom you love.

Music is "useless" but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and, if you have discipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician.

I have a friend whose boyfriend is a musician and he's having a very difficult time finding employment. I'd say he has discipline and passion. He works very hard. I've listened to his music and he's very, very good so it doesn't make sense to me.

Read fictional books woulding books of fiction won't save your from death or gainhelp you make money but you cry when you read your favorite stories.

Very nice sentence.

Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beautiful haiku, but, if you try writing a haiku, nobody will or can write a haiku in the same way likeas you, t. This applies forto drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.

Yes, maybe you can't gainmake enough money from something that you love but you can always do it in your free time, y. You don't need to be famous to do something unique, or to try to grow a career.

If you're happy when you do something that you like, then it isn't useless.

My first painting, after a three years is about a sunrise with a hiatus, is of a sunrise in the style of Van Gogh style.

I don't want to drop out this time,. I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.

This haiku is inspired inby a song ofby The Beattles:

My love for you smells like spring

Things tThat Are Useless

When I was in middle school I loved painting.

My favorite artists inat thate time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.

was --> were because there are multiple artists (was = only one)

I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things like: "Anybody can paint", "Painting is useless", and "Nobody cares about painting".

dream of [something]

Commas between the different quotes because it's a list

AndSo when I started high school, I began to do things "less useless" like math, mechanics, cooking, studying eEnglish, music and writing.

And --> So. "So" gives a sense of a next step; because these people said things to you, you chose to do "less useless" things.

Comma between "school" and "I" to make the transition smoother.

I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future was very dull for me.

Comma added to separate the two ideas.

But at the end of highschool I realized that you don´t need to obtain a benefit from something or somebody whomthat you love.

Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song and i. If you have discipline and passion, you can be athe greatest musician.

Reading fictional books wouldn't save your from death or gailet you earn money, but you cry when you read your favorite stories.

Anybody can write haiku, e. Even a child can write a beautiful haiku, b. But if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way like you, t. This applies for drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.

Yes, maybe you can't gain enough money from something that you love, but you can always do it in your free time, y. You don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to grow a career.

My first painting after three years is aboutof a sunrise within a Van Gogh style.

I don't want to drop ouquit this time, I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.

"Drop out" is more used for schools or a formal setting. For example, he dropped out of school and decided to work part-time.

If it's a hobby and something that is not at an institution, English speakers tend to use "quit." For example, he quit drawing, or he quit listening to music.

This haiku is inspired in a song of The Beattles:

My love for you smells like spring

When I was in middle school I loved painting.

My favorite artists inat thate time wasere Da Vinci, Miguel Angel, Van Gogh and Picasso.

"at the time" is a set phrase, and because you list more than one it's "was" -> "were"

I used to dream inof creating my own painting techniques and my own style, but people used to say me things to me like: "Anybody can paint", "Painting is useless", and "Nobody cares about painting".

AndThen when I started high school I began to do things "less useless" things like math, mechanics, cooking, studying eEnglish, music and writing.

I don't think "And when~" is incorrect, but I think "Then when~" flows better for telling a story.

I had lost my ability and motivation for drawing and painting, and sometimes I felt sad because my future wasfelt very dull forto me.

Music is "useless", but you can express your feelings through music or feel alive when you listen to your favorite song a. And if you have discipline and passion, you can be a greatest musician.

Reading fictional books wouldn't save your from death or help you gain money, but you cry when you read your favorite stories.

Anybody can write haiku, even a child can write a beautiful haiku, but if you try writing a haiku, nobody will can write a haiku in the same way likeas you, t. This applies forto drawing, writing, painting, mathematics, etc.

Yes, maybe you can't gainet enough money from something that you love, but you can always do it in your free time, y. You don't need to be famous to do something unique, or try to growstart a career.

My first painting after three years is about a sunrise within a Van Gogh style.

I don't want to drop out this time, I'm still young so I have time to become in a better artist.

You can only say "drop out" when you talk about quitting school, which you didn't mention earlier in the passage. Do you mean "I don't want to quit this time" or "I don't want to give up this time"?

This haiku is inspired inby a song ofby The Beattles:

My love for you smells like spring