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llimas

Jan. 16, 2025

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Things I would change in my life

I live in a noisy neighborhood in a busy big city. When I travel to another small cities I think that living there would increase my quality of life because there haven't so much transit traffic, has less noise, and the people seem to be calm.

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Things I would change in my life

I live in a noisy neighborhood in a busy big, busy city.

Size adjectives always come first in a list of adjectives.

When I travel to another, smaller cities I think that living there would increase my quality of life because there haveisn't so much transit traffic, has lesit's not as noisey, and the people seem to be calmer.

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llimas

Jan. 17, 2025

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Thank you :)

When I travel to another smaller cities I think that living there would increase my quality of life because therey don't haven't so much transit traffic, hasve less noise, and the people seem to be calmer.

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llimas

Jan. 17, 2025

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thank you :)

Things I would change in my life


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I live in a noisy neighborhood in a busy big city.


I live in a noisy neighborhood in a busy big, busy city.

Size adjectives always come first in a list of adjectives.

When I travel to another small cities I think that living there would increase my quality of life because there haven't so much transit traffic, has less noise, and the people seem to be calm.


When I travel to another smaller cities I think that living there would increase my quality of life because therey don't haven't so much transit traffic, hasve less noise, and the people seem to be calmer.

When I travel to another, smaller cities I think that living there would increase my quality of life because there haveisn't so much transit traffic, has lesit's not as noisey, and the people seem to be calmer.

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