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Mimi

June 3, 2020

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Things I want to keep doing

I want to keep studying English well-balanced.
I was taught how to study it be many good teacher but I couldn’t keep doing it.
My ideal routine is waking up early morning to run or walk and then studying English as long as possible.
Every night, I regret my day....
I think I hasn’t decided to my routine regularly in this life.
I have to sort what I learned out and decide to what and how much I want to improve each skill( reading, writing, listening and speaking) and also set my goal in detail.
Just do it!!!!

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Things I want to keep doing

I want to keep studying English in a well-balanced way.

I was taught how to study it bey many good teachers but I couldn’t keep doing it.

My ideal routine is waking up early in the morning to run or walk and then studying English for as long as possible.

Every night, I regret my day....

I don't think I hasn’tve decided to do my routine regularly in this lifbefore.

I have to sort out what I have learned out and decide to what and how much I want to improve in each skill( (reading, writing, listening and speaking) and also set my goasl in detail.

Just do it!!!!

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Mimi

June 3, 2020

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Thank you so much,

Things I want to keep doing

I want to keep studying English in a well-balanced way.

sounds better this way

I was taught how to study it bethe language by many good teachers, but I couldn’t keep doing it.

1) Saying "the language" sounds better than "it", especially since you say "it" again at the end of the sentence. In English writing, we try not to be so repetitive.
2) For what you want to say, the right word is "by" not "be"
3) Put a comma before the word "but" anytime there's 2 different clauses (clauses means ideas) in your sentence. First clause = you were taught to study. Second clause = you couldn't keep doing it.

My ideal routine is waking up early in the morning to run or walk, and then studying English for as long as possible.

Every night, I regret my day....

In English, we only use 3 dots "..." :)
Example:
I don't know what I'm going to do...

I think I hasn’ven't decided to do my routine regularly in this life.

I have to sort out what I learned out and decide to what and /how much I want to improve each skill( (reading, writing, listening and speaking), and also set my goals in detail.

You said "and" a lot in this sentence, so when you said "what and how much," I put a slash instead of the and. You can do this sometimes in the English language, but not all the time.
https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/grammar/style-and-usage/when-to-use-a-slash-in-writing.html

Just do it!!!!

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Nice journal!
From what I've learned with language learning, don't stress yourself out. If you study the whole day, you might burn yourself out. You should study for at least 30 minutes a day, but if you really want to advance, I would do 2-3 hours a day. But not the whole day :)

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Mimi

June 3, 2020

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Thank you so much! I’m glad to hear that! I’m living in Australia and I’m frustrated my English, but you’re right! I won’t my stress out! I’ll do my best as much as I don’t burn myself out :) Is it always necessary to put “,” before “but”?

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brambsie

June 3, 2020

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You're welcome!
I would say most of the time, yes, but not always. This website will probably help explaining better than I can: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma-before-but/

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Mimi

June 3, 2020

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Thank you:))) Are you studying German?

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brambsie

June 3, 2020

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Yeah! I see you are too :)

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Mimi

June 4, 2020

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Yeah, I studied German almost 10 years ago, so I forgot mostly all and leaning English is the first for me now but I still like it!

Things I want to keep doing


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I want to keep studying English well-balanced.


I want to keep studying English in a well-balanced way.

sounds better this way

I want to keep studying English in a well-balanced way.

I was taught how to study it be many good teacher but I couldn’t keep doing it.


I was taught how to study it bethe language by many good teachers, but I couldn’t keep doing it.

1) Saying "the language" sounds better than "it", especially since you say "it" again at the end of the sentence. In English writing, we try not to be so repetitive. 2) For what you want to say, the right word is "by" not "be" 3) Put a comma before the word "but" anytime there's 2 different clauses (clauses means ideas) in your sentence. First clause = you were taught to study. Second clause = you couldn't keep doing it.

I was taught how to study it bey many good teachers but I couldn’t keep doing it.

My ideal routine is waking up early morning to run or walk and then studying English as long as possible.


My ideal routine is waking up early in the morning to run or walk, and then studying English for as long as possible.

My ideal routine is waking up early in the morning to run or walk and then studying English for as long as possible.

Every night, I regret my day....


Every night, I regret my day....

In English, we only use 3 dots "..." :) Example: I don't know what I'm going to do...

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I think I hasn’t decided to my routine regularly in this life.


I think I hasn’ven't decided to do my routine regularly in this life.

I don't think I hasn’tve decided to do my routine regularly in this lifbefore.

I have to sort what I learned out and decide to what and how much I want to improve each skill( reading, writing, listening and speaking) and also set my goal in detail.


I have to sort out what I learned out and decide to what and /how much I want to improve each skill( (reading, writing, listening and speaking), and also set my goals in detail.

You said "and" a lot in this sentence, so when you said "what and how much," I put a slash instead of the and. You can do this sometimes in the English language, but not all the time. https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/grammar/style-and-usage/when-to-use-a-slash-in-writing.html

I have to sort out what I have learned out and decide to what and how much I want to improve in each skill( (reading, writing, listening and speaking) and also set my goasl in detail.

Just do it!!!!


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