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June 4, 2020

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Things I used to do

There are hundred of things I used to do but I don’t do now. When I was University student, I used to wake up early morning to get on first train, go to riverbed to practice lacrosse, and then go to university to take classes, after that work at Japanese restraint as a waitress.
At the moment, I had unlimited energy, so I was unbeatable.
Since I joined my ex-company, I used to go for drink with my co-worker who started working there at the same time and other store manager every week and also but lunch, dinner at convenient store or eat at fast food shop. Actually I’d like to cook but I couldn’t because it’s too busy to cook.
But now, I quote it and cook everyday to save money, so I’ve been leaning how to cook. I can keep doing even if I go back to Japan.

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When I was Ua university student, I used to wake up early in the morning to get on the first train, go to the river bed to practice lacrosse, and then go to university to take classes, and after that, work at Japanese restauraint as a waitress.

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Mimi

June 5, 2020

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Thank you for correcting my journaling!

There are hundred ofwere many things I used to do, but I don’t do nowanymore.

Areと言えば、今の話になる。しかし過去なので、Wereを使おう。
Hundredsって、何千と言ってみてるかな?こうすると自然にする。
または、Anymore。もう過去から、これのほうが自然だ。

When I was a University student, I used to wake up early morning to get on the first train, and go to the riverbed to practice lacrosse, and t. Then go to my university to take classes, after that work at a Japanese restraint as a waitress.

名詞の前にTheとAに気をつけましょう!

https://nativecamp.net/blog/20180404-article

At the momentat time, I had unlimited energy, so I was unbeatable.felt invincible.¶
過去についての言葉気をつけましょう!Momentと言えば、今の瞬間についてイメージが出ってくる。¶

そして、”I was unbeatable" と言えば、「私は無敵だった」のほうが近いかも。これは自分の気持ちの話なので、気持ちの言葉使おう!

Since I joined my ex-company, I used to go for drinks with my co-workesr who started working there at the same time, and other store manager every week an. We would also bueat lunch, or dinner at convenient stores or eat at fast food shoprestaurant.

Actually, I’d would have liked to cook, but I couldn’t because it’was too busy to cook.

But now, I quote it and cook everyday to save money, so I’ve been leaning how toin order to learn how to and save money, I've started cooking.

I can keep doing eEven if I go back to Japan, I can keep doing it.

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理解しにくいところがなかった。自然に話せるように詳細に気を付けよう!
また書いてね!

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Mimi

June 5, 2020

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Thank you so much! I’m glad to hear that! I’ll write later!

Things I used to do


There are hundred of things I used to do but I don’t do now.


There are hundred ofwere many things I used to do, but I don’t do nowanymore.

Areと言えば、今の話になる。しかし過去なので、Wereを使おう。 Hundredsって、何千と言ってみてるかな?こうすると自然にする。 または、Anymore。もう過去から、これのほうが自然だ。

When I was University student, I used to wake up early morning to get on first train, go to riverbed to practice lacrosse, and then go to university to take classes, after that work at Japanese restraint as a waitress.


When I was a University student, I used to wake up early morning to get on the first train, and go to the riverbed to practice lacrosse, and t. Then go to my university to take classes, after that work at a Japanese restraint as a waitress.

名詞の前にTheとAに気をつけましょう! https://nativecamp.net/blog/20180404-article

When I was Ua university student, I used to wake up early in the morning to get on the first train, go to the river bed to practice lacrosse, and then go to university to take classes, and after that, work at Japanese restauraint as a waitress.

At the moment, I had unlimited energy, so I was unbeatable.


At the momentat time, I had unlimited energy, so I was unbeatable.felt invincible.¶
過去についての言葉気をつけましょう!Momentと言えば、今の瞬間についてイメージが出ってくる。¶

そして、”I was unbeatable" と言えば、「私は無敵だった」のほうが近いかも。これは自分の気持ちの話なので、気持ちの言葉使おう!

Since I joined my ex-company, I used to go for drink with my co-worker who started working there at the same time and other store manager every week and also but lunch, dinner at convenient store or eat at fast food shop.


Since I joined my ex-company, I used to go for drinks with my co-workesr who started working there at the same time, and other store manager every week an. We would also bueat lunch, or dinner at convenient stores or eat at fast food shoprestaurant.

Actually I’d like to cook but I couldn’t because it’s too busy to cook.


Actually, I’d would have liked to cook, but I couldn’t because it’was too busy to cook.

But now, I quote it and cook everyday to save money, so I’ve been leaning how to cook.


But now, I quote it and cook everyday to save money, so I’ve been leaning how toin order to learn how to and save money, I've started cooking.

I can keep doing even if I go back to Japan.


I can keep doing eEven if I go back to Japan, I can keep doing it.

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