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THINGS I USED TO DO

I used to play baseball. When I was nine years old, I became acquainted with because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and he invite me. From then, I have played baseball for seven years. However I did not like the sports until I was a elementary school student, because the team was so strict, so I could not enjoy. However when I was a junior high school student, I could play baseball freely, and my skill developed. I thought it is important to do something, while enjoying.

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When I was nine years old, I became acquainted with the sport because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me on it.

From then on, I have played baseball for seven years.

However I did not like the sports until I wasbecame an elementary school student, because the team was so strict, sothat I could not enjoy it.

However w When I was ain junior high school student, I could, I was able to play baseball freely, and my skills developed further.

I thoughtink it is important to do something, while that you enjoy doing.

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repezendelivery344

May 18, 2020

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Thank you!!

I used to play baseball.

When I was nine years old, I became acquajointed with because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me.

FromAfter thenat, I have played baseball for seven years.

Please correct this!

THINGS I USED TO DO

I used to play baseball.

When I was nine years old, I became acquainted with because my friends because they belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me.

If you're talking in plural, then it's 'They' not 'He'.

From then, I have played baseball for seven years.

However I did not like the sports until I was an elementary school student, because the team was so strict, so I could not enjoy.

'An' not 'A'. When the next word begins with a vowel, then you have to use 'An'. Also, it's not 'the sports'. It is 'sports' in English.

However when I was a junior high school student, I could play baseball freely, and my skill developed.

I thought it iwas important to do something, while enjoying.

Please correct this!

THINGS I USED TO DO

I used to play baseball.

When I was nine years old, I became acquainted withlearned to play baseball because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me to play.

From then on, I have played baseball for seven years.

However I did not like the sports until I was ain elementary school student, because the team was so strict, so I could not enjoy it.

However when I was a junior in high school student, I could play baseball freely, and my skill develops improved.

I thoughtink it is important to do something, while enjoying it.

Please correct this!

THINGS I USED TO DO


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I used to play baseball.


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When I was nine years old, I became acquainted with because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and he invite me.


When I was nine years old, I became acquainted withlearned to play baseball because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me to play.

When I was nine years old, I became acquainted with because my friends because they belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me.

If you're talking in plural, then it's 'They' not 'He'.

When I was nine years old, I became acquajointed with because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me.

When I was nine years old, I became acquainted with the sport because my friends belonged to a baseball team, and they invited me on it.

From then, I have played baseball for seven years.


From then on, I have played baseball for seven years.

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FromAfter thenat, I have played baseball for seven years.

From then on, I have played baseball for seven years.

However I did not like the sports until I was a elementary school student, because the team was so strict, so I could not enjoy.


However I did not like the sports until I was ain elementary school student, because the team was so strict, so I could not enjoy it.

However I did not like the sports until I was an elementary school student, because the team was so strict, so I could not enjoy.

'An' not 'A'. When the next word begins with a vowel, then you have to use 'An'. Also, it's not 'the sports'. It is 'sports' in English.

However I did not like the sports until I wasbecame an elementary school student, because the team was so strict, sothat I could not enjoy it.

However when I was a junior high school student, I could play baseball freely, and my skill developed.


However when I was a junior in high school student, I could play baseball freely, and my skill develops improved.

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However w When I was ain junior high school student, I could, I was able to play baseball freely, and my skills developed further.

I thought it is important to do something, while enjoying.


I thoughtink it is important to do something, while enjoying it.

I thought it iwas important to do something, while enjoying.

I thoughtink it is important to do something, while that you enjoy doing.

Please correct this!


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