Jan. 15, 2021
Things I Bought and Felt Pleased about
I think it was some cosmetics stuff and I bought it on Taobao, which is a most popular online shopping app in china. It was an eyeliner which can be applied on the bottom of my eyelashes to make my eyes bigger and more attractive. One of the reason that I was so glad with it is that it was a quality eyeliners with reasonable price. In China, the price of import make up stuff is ridiculously high since authorities tend to impose substantial volume of tariff on foreign cosmetics to protect home companies. Therefore most people in China tend to choose online shopping or count on Wechat salers who go abroad to buy stuff regularly and sale it with lower price compared to physical stores. On top of that, I had a good shopping experience at that time. The online shop owner provided me with a thoughtful and passionate service which really impressed me. Most of all, It was really convenient. All I need to do was easily click the stuff I wand, put them into my shopping cart and paid money.
Things I Bought and Felt Pleased aAbout
If you are using title case, longer prepositions should also be capitalized.
I think it was some cosmetics stuff andthat I bought it on Taobao, which is a mostvery popular online shopping app in cChina.
The phrase "a most + adj." exists, as in "it's a most wonderful time of year," but it tends to appear mostly in somewhat literary or dated styles of writing.
It was an eyeliner which can be applied on the bottom of my eyelashes to make my eyes bigger and more attractive.
One of the reasons that I was so gladhappy with it is that it was a quality eyeliners with a reasonable price.
We say "happy with," not "glad with."
In China, the price of imported make up stuff is ridiculously high, since authorities tend to impose substantial volume of tariffs on foreign cosmetics to protect hdomestic companies.
Therefore, most people in China tend to choose online shopping or countrely on WecChat salers who go abroad to buy stuff regularly and saleell it withat lower prices compared to physical stores.
On top of that, I had a good shopping experience at that time.
The online shop owner provided me with a thoughtful and passiondedicated service, which really impressed me.
I second the other corrector's comment about "passionate."
Most of all, Iit was really convenient.
All I need to do was easily click the stuff I wandt, put ithem into my shopping cart and paid money.
"Stuff" is generally singular.
Jan. 16, 2021
One of the reasons that I was so gladhappy with it is that it was a quality eyeliners with a reasonable price.
I don't think the simple past is necessarily wrong. If an ongoing fact is to be emphasized, the present indicative or present perfect may be more acceptable, but the simple past isn't necessarily wrong and can often be preferable, as I think it is here.
Jan. 16, 2021
Most of all, Iit was really convenient.
I agree with the capitalization change, but I disagree that "really" is particularly vague. In formal writing, which in any case this isn't, it's undesirable, but the meaning is still very (really) clear to me.
Jan. 16, 2021
Thank you so much 😊. I learned a lot
Things I Bought and Felt Pleased about
I think it was some cosmetics stuff andthat I bought it on Taobao, which is aone of the most popular online shopping apps in cChina.
We need a plural noun to use "one of", e.g. "one of the worst day*s* of my life" or "behind one of these door*s* is a million dollars in cash".
It was an eyeliner which can be applied on the bottom of my eyelashes to make my eyes look bigger and more attractive.
One of the reason that I was so glad with it is that it wais a quality eyeliners with at a reasonable price.
Saying "it was a quality eyeliner" implies it no longer is a quality eyeliner.
In China, the price of import make up stuffed cosmetics is ridiculously high since authorities tend to impose substantial volume of tariffs on foreign cosmetics to protect home companies.
Consider "import duties" instead of "tariffs".
Therefore most people in China tend to cshoosep online shopping or countor rely on WecChat saellers who go abroad to buy stuff regularly and saleell it withat a lower price compared to physical stores.
On top of thatIndeed, I had a good shopping experience at that time.
"On top of that" sounds like you're presenting an argument. "at that time" suggests a period of time found on a calendar or clock, whereas "that time" suggests a single instance
TI was impressed by how the online shop owner provided me with a thoughtful and passionate service which really impressed me.
"passionate" seems a bit out of place here (we might be "passionate" about a hobby, a sports team, a cause)... adjectives that would be more suitable here are: "knowledgeable", "competent", "attentive", "helpful"
Most of all, Iit was respecially convenient.
"really" is correct, but we're taught in school not to use such vague (unspecific) terminology.
All I needed to do was easily click the stuff I wanted, put them into my shopping cart and paid moneymake the payment.
Jan. 16, 2021
One of the reason that I was so glad with it is that it wais a quality eyeliners with at a reasonable price.
I don't think the simple past is necessarily wrong. If an ongoing fact is to be emphasized, the present indicative or present perfect may be more acceptable, but the simple past isn't necessarily wrong and can often be preferable, as I think it is here.
Jan. 16, 2021
Most of all, Iit was respecially convenient.
I agree with the capitalization change, but I disagree that "really" is particularly vague. In formal writing, which in any case this isn't, it's undesirable, but the meaning is still very (really) clear to me.
Jan. 16, 2021
Thank you so much. It helps me a lot
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One of the reason that I was so glad with it is that it was a quality eyeliners with reasonable price. One Saying "it was a quality eyeliner" implies it no longer is a quality eyeliner. One of the reasons that I was so We say "happy with," not "glad with." |
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In China, the price of import make up stuff is ridiculously high since authorities tend to impose substantial volume of tariff on foreign cosmetics to protect home companies. In China, the price of import Consider "import duties" instead of "tariffs". In China, the price of imported make |
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It was an eyeliner which can be applied on the bottom of my eyelashes to make my eyes bigger and more attractive. It was an eyeliner which can be applied on the bottom of my eyelashes to make my eyes look bigger and more attractive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Things I Bought and Felt Pleased about This sentence has been marked as perfect! Things I Bought and Felt Pleased If you are using title case, longer prepositions should also be capitalized. |
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I think it was some cosmetics stuff and I bought it on Taobao, which is a most popular online shopping app in china. I think it was some cosmetics We need a plural noun to use "one of", e.g. "one of the worst day*s* of my life" or "behind one of these door*s* is a million dollars in cash". I think it was some cosmetics The phrase "a most + adj." exists, as in "it's a most wonderful time of year," but it tends to appear mostly in somewhat literary or dated styles of writing. |
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Therefore most people in China tend to choose online shopping or count on Wechat salers who go abroad to buy stuff regularly and sale it with lower price compared to physical stores. Therefore most people in China tend to Therefore, most people in China tend to choose online shopping or |
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On top of that, I had a good shopping experience at that time.
"On top of that" sounds like you're presenting an argument. "at that time" suggests a period of time found on a calendar or clock, whereas "that time" suggests a single instance This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The online shop owner provided me with a thoughtful and passionate service which really impressed me.
"passionate" seems a bit out of place here (we might be "passionate" about a hobby, a sports team, a cause)... adjectives that would be more suitable here are: "knowledgeable", "competent", "attentive", "helpful" The online shop owner provided me with I second the other corrector's comment about "passionate." |
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Most of all, It was really convenient. Most of all, "really" is correct, but we're taught in school not to use such vague (unspecific) terminology. Most of all, |
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All I need to do was easily click the stuff I wand, put them into my shopping cart and paid money. All I needed to do was All I need to do was easily click the stuff I wan "Stuff" is generally singular. |
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