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galoarellano1987

Sept. 9, 2024

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Things around me

Today I listened in a podcast, the importance to describe things around me. The reason, practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromment.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say all I saw:

1.- My cactus
2.- My coworkers
3.- My boss, sometimes He stayed in her office however I only saw a one time today, very strange.
4.- My CPU with whole information about my job.

Well, I hope will be not boring you.

Thanks for your corrections and advices, every advice that your give me is a excellente advice for my growth.

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Things aAround mMe

Today, I listened into a podcast, about the importance tof describeing things around me.

The reason,s are to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromnment.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say alltate everything that I saw:


1.
- My cactus
2.
- My coworkers
3.
- My boss, s(i.e., Sometimes Hhe stayed in heris office h. However, I only saw a onhim a single time today, which is very strange.)

4.- My CPU with whole information about(i.e., I need this for my job.)

Well, I hope will be nothat this wasn't boring you.

This is interesting. What's the podcast episode called?

Thanks for your corrections and advices, e. Every single piece of advice that your give me is a excellente advice for my growth.

Things around me

You could also say "My surroundings" or "Objects around me." These are just ideas! Your title is correct.

Today I listened into a podcast, on the importance tof describeing things around me.

The reason,s discussed were to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromnment.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say allI will just list what I saw:


1.
- My cactus
2.
- My coworkers
3.
- My boss, who sometimes He stayeds in her office h. However, I only saw a one timher once today, v. Very strange.

4.- My CPU with wholall of the information about my job.

I'm assuming here that the CPU contains the information about your job? Or did you mean your computer?

Well, I hope will be noit isn't boring you.

Thanks for your corrections and advices, every advice that your give me. Your help is a excellente advice for my growth.

The word "advice" was mentioned 3 times, so I thought shortening the sentence would help.

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Good work!

Today, I listeneheard in a podcast, the importance tof describeing things around me.

The main reason,s are to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromnment.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say all I saw: ¶

1.- M
I saw my cactus
2.- M
, my co-workers
3.- M
, and my boss, (he sometimes He stayeds in heris office howevera lot but I only saw a one time today,him once today which is very strange).

Sorry, I am not sure what you mean by "the letter is shortly"

When writing lists in English, you can also write lists like this (more academic style):
I saw: (1) my cactus, (2) my co-workers, (3) my boss (sometimes he stays in his office, however I only saw him once today which is strange), and (4) my file with my job information.

Be careful with pronouns. You said "he stayed" and "her office", so I'm not sure about the gender of your boss.

4.- My CPU with whole information about my job.

I'm not sure what "CPU" is in this context...

"My computer which is I use for my job" ??

Well, I hope will bethis post was not boring for you.

Thanks for your corrections and advices,; every piece of advice that your give me is a excellente advice for my growth.

The use of semi-colon (;) is required here to split apart the two different/independent parts of the sentence.

Feedback

Great post.

Today, I listened in a podcast,earned the importance tof describeing things around me. from a podcast

The reason, was that it helps me to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromment.

This letterentry is shortly, so that I justI will say all I saw:


1.- My cactus

2.- My coworkers

3.- My boss
, sometimes He stayed. She is always in her office h. However I only saw a one time today, veryher once today, which was strange.

4.- My CPU with wholcomputer containing all the information about my job.

Well, I hope will bethis did not boringe you.

Thanks for your corrections and advices, every advice that your give me is a excellente advice for. Your corrections really helps my growth.

Things around me


Things around me

You could also say "My surroundings" or "Objects around me." These are just ideas! Your title is correct.

Things aAround mMe

Today I listened in a podcast, the importance to describe things around me.


Today, I listened in a podcast,earned the importance tof describeing things around me. from a podcast

Today, I listeneheard in a podcast, the importance tof describeing things around me.

Today I listened into a podcast, on the importance tof describeing things around me.

Today, I listened into a podcast, about the importance tof describeing things around me.

The reason, practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromment.


The reason, was that it helps me to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromment.

The main reason,s are to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromnment.

The reason,s discussed were to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromnment.

The reason,s are to practice my vocabulary and can connect with my enviromnment.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say all I saw: 1.- My cactus 2.- My coworkers 3.- My boss, sometimes He stayed in her office however I only saw a one time today, very strange.


This letterentry is shortly, so that I justI will say all I saw:


1.- My cactus

2.- My coworkers

3.- My boss
, sometimes He stayed. She is always in her office h. However I only saw a one time today, veryher once today, which was strange.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say all I saw: ¶

1.- M
I saw my cactus
2.- M
, my co-workers
3.- M
, and my boss, (he sometimes He stayeds in heris office howevera lot but I only saw a one time today,him once today which is very strange).

Sorry, I am not sure what you mean by "the letter is shortly" When writing lists in English, you can also write lists like this (more academic style): I saw: (1) my cactus, (2) my co-workers, (3) my boss (sometimes he stays in his office, however I only saw him once today which is strange), and (4) my file with my job information. Be careful with pronouns. You said "he stayed" and "her office", so I'm not sure about the gender of your boss.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say allI will just list what I saw:


1.
- My cactus
2.
- My coworkers
3.
- My boss, who sometimes He stayeds in her office h. However, I only saw a one timher once today, v. Very strange.

This letter is shortly, so that I just will say alltate everything that I saw:


1.
- My cactus
2.
- My coworkers
3.
- My boss, s(i.e., Sometimes Hhe stayed in heris office h. However, I only saw a onhim a single time today, which is very strange.)

4.- My CPU with whole information about my job.


4.- My CPU with wholcomputer containing all the information about my job.

4.- My CPU with whole information about my job.

I'm not sure what "CPU" is in this context... "My computer which is I use for my job" ??

4.- My CPU with wholall of the information about my job.

I'm assuming here that the CPU contains the information about your job? Or did you mean your computer?

4.- My CPU with whole information about(i.e., I need this for my job.)

Well, I hope will be not boring you.


Well, I hope will bethis did not boringe you.

Well, I hope will bethis post was not boring for you.

Well, I hope will be noit isn't boring you.

Well, I hope will be nothat this wasn't boring you.

This is interesting. What's the podcast episode called?

Thanks for your corrections and advices, every advice that your give me is a excellente advice for my growth.


Thanks for your corrections and advices, every advice that your give me is a excellente advice for. Your corrections really helps my growth.

Thanks for your corrections and advices,; every piece of advice that your give me is a excellente advice for my growth.

The use of semi-colon (;) is required here to split apart the two different/independent parts of the sentence.

Thanks for your corrections and advices, every advice that your give me. Your help is a excellente advice for my growth.

The word "advice" was mentioned 3 times, so I thought shortening the sentence would help.

Thanks for your corrections and advices, e. Every single piece of advice that your give me is a excellente advice for my growth.

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