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Things about Today and Tomorrow

Today, I had originally planned to sort out another video from my phone storage. But I'm too busy now and also need to pack for tomorrow's hike.

I'll just let it go and continue when I get back to Shanghai the day after tomorrow.

And I'll hike a few kilometers depending on how my body feels. I just want to leave Shanghai and walk into nature.

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(A Few Things) about Today and Tomorrow

Today, I had originally planned to sort out another video from my phone storage, but I'm too busy now and also need to pack for tomorrow's hike.

Rather than beginning a new sentence with “but,” most English teachers would tell us to combine them into a single sentence.

I'll just let it go and continue when I get back to Shanghai the day after tomorrow.

And I'll hike a few kilometers depending on how my body feels.

I just want to leave Shanghai and walk {into | in} nature.

“Into” is OK, but “walk in nature” is a set phrase. In this sense, “in” is like “among”: walk in nature > walk among natural things

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Things about Today and Tomorrow


(A Few Things) about Today and Tomorrow

Today, I had originally planned to sort out another video from my phone storage.


Today, I had originally planned to sort out another video from my phone storage, but I'm too busy now and also need to pack for tomorrow's hike.

Rather than beginning a new sentence with “but,” most English teachers would tell us to combine them into a single sentence.

But I'm too busy now and also need to pack for tomorrow's hike.


I'll just let it go and continue when I get back to Shanghai the day after tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I'll hike a few kilometers depending on how my body feels.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I just want to leave Shanghai and walk into nature.


I just want to leave Shanghai and walk {into | in} nature.

“Into” is OK, but “walk in nature” is a set phrase. In this sense, “in” is like “among”: walk in nature > walk among natural things

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