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"They say" arguement

a. Many americans have been suggesting that public college should be free to give everyone equal opportunity to pursue their interest.
b. Although I should know better by now, I still can't shake the feeling that internet is rotting our brain.
c. In Sanford's essay, He question the popular notion that humanities degree is luxury as it does not provide a better job opportunities.
d. Some people believe that giving all clean needle for free decreases overall bio and sharp waste in area, and other argue that it actually increases improper syringe disposal.
e. In discussion of homework in elementary school, a number of teachers argues that homework is collerated to higher achievement. Meanwhile, a lot of children believe the sole purpose of homework is "to bore you."


a) Free college tuition at public universities
b) Social media use among teenagers
c) The value of studying the humanities in college
d) Public-funded clean neddle exchanges
e) Assigning homework in elementry school

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"They say" arguement

a.

Many aAmericans have been suggesting that public college should be free to give everyone equal opportunity to pursue their interests.

b.

Although I should know better by now, I still can't shake the feeling that the internet is rotting our brains.

c. In Sanford's essay, Hhe questions the popular notion that humanities degree iss are a luxury as ithey does not provide a better job opportunities.

d. Some people believe that giving allway clean needles for free decreases overall bio and sharp waste in an area, and others argue that it actually increases improper syringe disposal.

e. In discussion of homework in elementary school, a number of teachers argues that homework is collerrrelated to higher achievement.

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Mostly just plural and singular agreements to fix :)

"They say" arguement

Many americans have been suggesting that public college should be free (in order) to give everyone equal opportunity to pursue their interest.

There's conflicting meanings of "free to" in this sentence (it could be "free to poor people" which is a different use of "to"). It's fine, but it sounds a bit better to add "in order to" instead of "to" to distinguish between the "to" indicating a recipient and the "to" indicating a purpose.

Although I should know better by now, I still can't shake the feeling that the internet is rotting our brain.

c. In Sanford's essay, He question the popular notion that (a humanities degree is a luxury / humanities degrees are luxuries) as it does not provide a better job opportunities.

"luxury" in this context is a noun, so needs the appropriate pluralisation

"job opportunities" are plural, so don't take an "a"

d. Some people believe that giving alleveryone clean needles for free decreases overall biological and sharp waste in an area, and others argue that it actually increases improper syringe disposal.

"bio" is an abbreviation of "biological" but it's kind of casual (unless used as a prefix), and this sentence is written in more of an academic tone.

e. IWhen discussion ofng homework in elementary school, a number of teachers argues that homework is collerrrelated to higher achievement.

"a teacher argues"
"a number of teachers argue"

"a number of teachers" is plural, so argue should be in the correct form.

Meanwhile, a lot of children believe that the sole purpose of homework is "to bore you."

"They say" arguement


"They say" arguement

"They say" arguement

a.


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Many americans have been suggesting that public college should be free to give everyone equal opportunity to pursue their interest.


Many americans have been suggesting that public college should be free (in order) to give everyone equal opportunity to pursue their interest.

There's conflicting meanings of "free to" in this sentence (it could be "free to poor people" which is a different use of "to"). It's fine, but it sounds a bit better to add "in order to" instead of "to" to distinguish between the "to" indicating a recipient and the "to" indicating a purpose.

Many aAmericans have been suggesting that public college should be free to give everyone equal opportunity to pursue their interests.

b.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although I should know better by now, I still can't shake the feeling that internet is rotting our brain.


Although I should know better by now, I still can't shake the feeling that the internet is rotting our brain.

Although I should know better by now, I still can't shake the feeling that the internet is rotting our brains.

e. In discussion of homework in elementary school, a number of teachers argues that homework is collerated to higher achievement.


e. IWhen discussion ofng homework in elementary school, a number of teachers argues that homework is collerrrelated to higher achievement.

"a teacher argues" "a number of teachers argue" "a number of teachers" is plural, so argue should be in the correct form.

e. In discussion of homework in elementary school, a number of teachers argues that homework is collerrrelated to higher achievement.

Meanwhile, a lot of children believe the sole purpose of homework is "to bore you."


Meanwhile, a lot of children believe that the sole purpose of homework is "to bore you."

c. In Sanford's essay, He question the popular notion that humanities degree is luxury as it does not provide a better job opportunities.


c. In Sanford's essay, He question the popular notion that (a humanities degree is a luxury / humanities degrees are luxuries) as it does not provide a better job opportunities.

"luxury" in this context is a noun, so needs the appropriate pluralisation "job opportunities" are plural, so don't take an "a"

c. In Sanford's essay, Hhe questions the popular notion that humanities degree iss are a luxury as ithey does not provide a better job opportunities.

d. Some people believe that giving all clean needle for free decreases overall bio and sharp waste in area, and other argue that it actually increases improper syringe disposal.


d. Some people believe that giving alleveryone clean needles for free decreases overall biological and sharp waste in an area, and others argue that it actually increases improper syringe disposal.

"bio" is an abbreviation of "biological" but it's kind of casual (unless used as a prefix), and this sentence is written in more of an academic tone.

d. Some people believe that giving allway clean needles for free decreases overall bio and sharp waste in an area, and others argue that it actually increases improper syringe disposal.

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