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adichira

yesterday

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These Days

I've been studying hard; I really think that I'm obsessed with writing in English. Also, while I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write! But the good thing is that, inconsciously, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.

I had discovered that I enjoy journaling or writing about my thoughts or experiences. Then, I'm in the search for find a website with a warm community to write and comment too. LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, no more.

I tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat", but the majority of time it isn't happen. Maybe I'm making people uncomfortable here. So, I really appreciate if you know a website for write how I want, and you could share it with me. :D

Thank you for reading!


Estos días

He estado estudiando mucho; realmente creo que estoy obsesionada con escribir en inglés. Además, mientras intento dormir, ¡pienso en más temas sobre los que quiero escribir! Pero lo bueno es que, inconscientemente, ahora pienso en inglés, no en mi lengua materna.

He descubierto que me gusta escribir un diario o escribir sobre mis pensamientos o experiencias. Por eso, estoy buscando una página web con una comunidad acogedora en la que escribir y comentar. LangCorrect y Journaly son plataformas estupendas para recibir comentarios sobre la gramática, pero nada más.

Intento ser cordial en mis correcciones y dejar preguntas para continuar una especie de "chat", pero la mayoría de las veces no sucede. Quizás estoy haciendo que la gente se sienta incómoda aquí. Por eso, te agradecería mucho que, si conoces una página web en la que pueda escribir como quiero, la compartieras conmigo. :D

¡Gracias por leer!

Corrections

I hadve discovered that I enjoy journaling or writing about my thoughts or experiences.

Then, I'm in theat is why, I'm searching for find a website with a warm community to write and comment too.

Then --> That is why (casual), Therefore (formal), For this reason (formal)

LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, no and more.

(, no more) would mean there is nothing else these websites provide to you which isn't what you mean I think.

I also tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat"spark conversation, but the majority of time it ithis doesn't happen.

So, I really appreciate if you know a website forthat allows me to write how I (want), and you could share it with me. :D

(want) : could be "would like" instead if you want to sound more polite.

Feedback

Thank you for the writeup! I think it may be hard to maintain a conversation on LangCorrect, since people may only drop in when they have time. Maybe you would enjoy a discord server for language learners more, or join a server related to your hobby and communicate in text channels that speak english.

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adichira

today

7

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and correct it. Discord scares me, I don't know why... the security, scam, rob your data, etc. Perhaps I'm being so dramatic, hahaha.

These Days

I've been studying hard; I, and really think that I'mfeel properly obsessed with writing in English.

Also, wWhile I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write!

If it's a paragraph, also isn't really needed. If it's a series of texts, maybe.

But the good thing is that, inconscious, albeit unintentionally, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.

Inconsiously isn't a word, unlike 'unconsciously'(in my dreams, not even daydreams but 'while unconscious') and 'subconscious'(occurring without ever being directly noticed, 'the effects of my subconscious'), but 'unintentionally', there you go.

I had discovered that I enjoymy enjoyment of journaling, or any writing about mydown of thoughts or experiences.

TSo then, I'm in the search for find find myself in search of a website with a warm community to write andwith, and maybe comment on too.

LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, but not moruch else.

I've tried to be warm in my corrections, and even leave questions to continuewards a kind of "chat", but the majority of time it iit usually doesn't happen to me.

Maybe, I'm making people uncomfortable here...

SoWell, I'd really appreciate if you know a website for writeing how I want, and if you could shared it with me. :D

Thank you for reading!

Feedback

Good luck! I think a lot is expressed even without necessarily chatting, am a bit new and unsure of expectation on this site, except say helpfulness. I wouldn't say it's worth leaving over unless bored.

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adichira

today

7

Thank you very much for your feedback and for taking the time to correct my mistakes. This is a great place to improve your grammar. I have grown in my English a lot here. I'll keep trying, even if I only write about superficial topics, hahaha.

Also, while I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write about!

But the good thing is that, iunconsciously, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.

Then, I'm in the search for find a website with a warm community to write and comment toowith.

I tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat", but the majority of time it idoesn't happen.

So, I really appreciate if you know a website for writeing how I want, and if you could share it with me. :D

Feedback

Great job! I love to chat a bit too, but I'm not sure if this is the right website for it. Maybe try discord?

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adichira

today

7

Hello, thank you very much for your feedback. You really read me and were kind with my writing. Thank you. About Discord, I don't know, but it scares me, the security, scam, rob your data, maybe I have watched many movies hahaha.

I've been studying hard; I really think that I'm obsessed with writing in English.

Also, while I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write about!

You cannot "write a topic" but you can "write ABOUT a topic"

But the good thing is that, iunconsciously, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.

Wrong prefix for negative words for this word. It should be un-, not in-

I had discovered that I enjoy journaling or writing about my thoughts or experiences.

Then, I'm in the search for find a website with a warm community to write and comment too.

LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, no more.

Thank you for recommending me a new app! (Journaly) btw the sentence is correct

I tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat", but the majority of the time it idoesn't happen.

Not "of time" it is "of the time" in this context. Use "does not", not "is not" in front of happen. "is not" is used for present continuous tense.

Maybe I'm making people uncomfortable here.

So, I would really appreciate it if you knoew a website for writeing how I want, and you could share it with me. :D

"Would" because you want something and are okay if you get it or not. It is ALWAYS "appreciate it" in this context. It is not "for write", it is either "to write" or "for writing", both are correct, but combining an element of one with the two is wrong

Thank you for reading!

Feedback

Here are the things to improve on

1. Use correct prepositions with verbs to complete the meaning naturally.
2. Choose accurate negative prefixes to avoid nonstandard words.
3. Apply modal verbs like “would” for polite or hypothetical expressions.
4. Use natural time expressions to describe frequency or habits.
5. Maintain consistent verb tense to match the intended timeframe.
I recommend Grammarly.

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adichira

yesterday

7

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate your time! Does Grammarly only correct me, or does it also explain?

These Days


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I've been studying hard; I really think that I'm obsessed with writing in English.


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I've been studying hard; I, and really think that I'mfeel properly obsessed with writing in English.

Also, while I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write!


Also, while I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write about!

You cannot "write a topic" but you can "write ABOUT a topic"

Also, while I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write about!

Also, wWhile I'm trying to go to sleep, I'm thinking about more topics I want to write!

If it's a paragraph, also isn't really needed. If it's a series of texts, maybe.

But the good thing is that, inconsciously, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.


But the good thing is that, iunconsciously, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.

Wrong prefix for negative words for this word. It should be un-, not in-

But the good thing is that, iunconsciously, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.

But the good thing is that, inconscious, albeit unintentionally, I'm thinking in English now, not in my native language.

Inconsiously isn't a word, unlike 'unconsciously'(in my dreams, not even daydreams but 'while unconscious') and 'subconscious'(occurring without ever being directly noticed, 'the effects of my subconscious'), but 'unintentionally', there you go.

I had discovered that I enjoy journaling or writing about my thoughts or experiences.


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I had discovered that I enjoymy enjoyment of journaling, or any writing about mydown of thoughts or experiences.

I hadve discovered that I enjoy journaling or writing about my thoughts or experiences.

Then, I'm in the search for find a website with a warm community to write and comment too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then, I'm in the search for find a website with a warm community to write and comment toowith.

TSo then, I'm in the search for find find myself in search of a website with a warm community to write andwith, and maybe comment on too.

Then, I'm in theat is why, I'm searching for find a website with a warm community to write and comment too.

Then --> That is why (casual), Therefore (formal), For this reason (formal)

LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, no more.


LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, no more.

Thank you for recommending me a new app! (Journaly) btw the sentence is correct

LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, but not moruch else.

LangCorrect and Journaly are great platforms to receive grammar feedback, no and more.

(, no more) would mean there is nothing else these websites provide to you which isn't what you mean I think.

I tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat", but the majority of time it isn't happen.


I tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat", but the majority of the time it idoesn't happen.

Not "of time" it is "of the time" in this context. Use "does not", not "is not" in front of happen. "is not" is used for present continuous tense.

I tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat", but the majority of time it idoesn't happen.

I've tried to be warm in my corrections, and even leave questions to continuewards a kind of "chat", but the majority of time it iit usually doesn't happen to me.

I also tried to be warm in my corrections and leave questions to continue a kind of "chat"spark conversation, but the majority of time it ithis doesn't happen.

Maybe I'm making people uncomfortable here.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe, I'm making people uncomfortable here...

Thank you for reading!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, I really appreciate if you know a website for write how I want, and you could share it with me. :D


So, I would really appreciate it if you knoew a website for writeing how I want, and you could share it with me. :D

"Would" because you want something and are okay if you get it or not. It is ALWAYS "appreciate it" in this context. It is not "for write", it is either "to write" or "for writing", both are correct, but combining an element of one with the two is wrong

So, I really appreciate if you know a website for writeing how I want, and if you could share it with me. :D

SoWell, I'd really appreciate if you know a website for writeing how I want, and if you could shared it with me. :D

So, I really appreciate if you know a website forthat allows me to write how I (want), and you could share it with me. :D

(want) : could be "would like" instead if you want to sound more polite.

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