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Oct. 12, 2022

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There's not small phones anymore

A few months ago I began to consider the idea of changing my phone for a smaller one. I had just read a book about digital minimalism and thanks to that I started my quest. But it was all in vain because even if the chips are getting smaller the phone screens are doing the opposite. It feels like I have a tablet in my hand rather than a phone.
After looking for a good two weeks I gave up, but by coincidence my mom bought a new phone and I was able to keep her old one: an almost decade old Iphone 6. And after using it for a month I can't be more happy. The size and weight are perfect and after a battery replacement, it still works like a charm.
Probably is just a matter of time until it becomes useless because of its lack of software updates, but I hope it runs for enough time for other companies to do new compact smartphones. That or I'll probably buy a dumbphone.

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There's not small phones anymore

A few months ago I began to consider the idea of changing my phone for a smaller one.

I had just read a book about digital minimalism and thanks to that I started my quest.

But it was all in vain because even if the chips are getting smaller the phone screens are doing the opposite.

It feels like I have a tablet in my hand rather than a phone.

After looking for a good two weeks I gave up, but by coincidence my mom bought a new phone and I was able to keep her old one: an almost decade old Iphone 6.

And after using it for a month I can'ouldn’t be more happy.

The size and weight are perfect and after a battery replacement, it still works like a charm.

PIt’s probably is just a matter of time until it becomes useless because of itsthe lack of software updates, but I hope it runs for enough time for other companies to dom create new compact smartphones.

That or I'll probably buy a dumbp phone.

There's not small phones anymore

Not doesn't make sense here. No fits better.

A few months ago I began to consider the idea of changing my phone for a smaller one.

I had just read a book about digital minimalism and thanks to that I started my quest.

But it was all in vain because even if the chips are getting smaller the phone screens are doing the opposite.

It feels like I have a tablet in my hand rather than a phone.

After looking for a good two weeks I gave up, but by coincidence my mom bought a new phone and I was able to keep her old one: an almost decade old Iphone 6.

And after using it for a month I caouldn't be more happy.

The size and weight are perfect and after a battery replacement, it still works like a charm.

PIt's probably is just a matter of time until it becomes useless because of its lack of software updates, but I hope it runs for enough time for other companies to do new compact smartphones.

I added and "it" to make what you're talking about more clear.

There's not small phones anymore


There's not small phones anymore

Not doesn't make sense here. No fits better.

There's not small phones anymore

A few months ago I began to consider the idea of changing my phone for a smaller one.


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I had just read a book about digital minimalism and thanks to that I started my quest.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But it was all in vain because even if the chips are getting smaller the phone screens are doing the opposite.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It feels like I have a tablet in my hand rather than a phone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After looking for a good two weeks I gave up, but by coincidence my mom bought a new phone and I was able to keep her old one: an almost decade old Iphone 6.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And after using it for a month I can't be more happy.


And after using it for a month I caouldn't be more happy.

And after using it for a month I can'ouldn’t be more happy.

The size and weight are perfect and after a battery replacement, it still works like a charm.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Probably is just a matter of time until it becomes useless because of its lack of software updates, but I hope it runs for enough time for other companies to do new compact smartphones.


PIt's probably is just a matter of time until it becomes useless because of its lack of software updates, but I hope it runs for enough time for other companies to do new compact smartphones.

I added and "it" to make what you're talking about more clear.

PIt’s probably is just a matter of time until it becomes useless because of itsthe lack of software updates, but I hope it runs for enough time for other companies to dom create new compact smartphones.

That or I'll probably buy a dumbphone.


That or I'll probably buy a dumbp phone.

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