Sept. 14, 2022
I have been running a small clinic. The number of staff members is only four.
Despite or rather because they were only four, they almost always complained about their colleagues. None of them could escape criticism from the other three.
I had been worried about that situation, but I couldn't find any effective solution.
Two months ago, one of my staff members suddenly had to take a temporary leave of absence because of mental illness. The others and I decided to keep working without her, rather than temporarily employing someone. It was because our work is a little special and anyone who works with us needs to be trained hard in advance.
The first week, all of us were nervous as well as tired, so as to do our job with no mistakes. Everyone kept an eye on the whole flow of the job, and helped each other. The second week, we gradually came to get accustomed to how to work with a vacancy. The third week, we even came to be able to deal with working with one more vacancy.
Now, no one criticizes others. They are lively working, even with a relaxed smile. Sorry to say, the absent staff member has to leave for another couple of months, the other staff members don't complain about this situation. They seem to be confident with themselves to keep working until she will come back.
You can't really decide what is good and what is bad.
I deeply hope that the absent staff member will get something good, too.
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Since you are one of them, "We" would be more effective.
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They seem to be confident with themselves to keep working until she will come back.
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You can't really decide what is good and what is bad.
This sentence makes sense, but I'm not sure the context or meaning of it in the larger paragraph.
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There Aare Many Sides to Things
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残念ですね!
None of them could escape criticism from the other three.
I had been worried about thate situation, but I couldn't find any effective solution.
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You can't really decide what is good and what is bad.
I deeply hope that the absent staff member will get something good, too.
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There Are Many Sides to Things
I have been running a small clinic.
The number of staff members is only four.
Or:
"There are only four staff members"
Despite or rather bBecause they were are only four, they almost always complained about their colleagues.
Your tenses are a little confusing to me, in the last sentence you were in the present tense, but now you're talking in the past tense.
None of them couldan escape criticism from the other three.
I had beenwas worried about thate situation, but I couldn't find any effective solution.
Two months ago, one of my staff members suddenly had to take a temporary leave of absence because of mental illness.
The others and IWe decided to keep working without her, rather than temporarily employing someone.
It wais because our work is a little specialunique and anyone who wants to works with us needs to be trained hard in advance.
The first week, all of us were nervous as well asnd tired, so as to do our job with no mistakes.
I'm a little confused with your sentence, I think it's a little clearer if you write it like this:
"The first week, we worked ourselves to exhaustion, so as to do our job with no mistakes."
Everyone kept an eye on the whole flow of the jobflow, and helped each other.
The second week, we gradually became to get accustomed to how to working with a vacancy.
The third week, we even became to be able to deal withbetter at working with one mormore than one vacancy.
Now, no one criticizes others.
They are lively working lively, even with a relaxed smile.
Sorry to saUnfortunately, the absent staff member has to leave for another couple of months, but the other staff members don't complain about this situation.
They seem to be confident with themselves to keepin working until she will comes back.
You can't really decide what is good and what is bad.
I deeply hope that the absent staff member will get something good,something good will happen to the absent staff member too.
I have been running a small clinic.
Despite or rather because they were only four, they almost always complained about their colleagues.
I don't think it's correct to use despite or rather,
You can also use "as" they where...
It was because our work is a littlesomehow special and anyone who works with us needs to be trained hard in advance.
The first week, all of us were nervous as well as tired, so as to do our job with no mistakes.
Now, no one criticizes others.
They seem to be confident with themselves to keep working until she will comes back.
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Sorry to say, the absent staff member has to leave for another couple of months, the other staff members don't complain about this situation.
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