Oct. 23, 2022
Theft victim
-Please give us an accurate account of what happened.
-I was sitting on the tube train and suddenly when I looked through the window a man wearing a balaclava whipped my briefcase off my hand. Then he pushed his elbows through the crowd, almost forced the closing door and fled.
-Was there anything valuable in your briefcase?
- My iPhone and my credit card.
- Who else saw the thief?
-A lady with a Maltese dog on her lap. She was in front of me but seemed paralysed with fear.
- Please use this phone to call your bank and block the card. When it's freezed you wont be held liable for any fraudulent charges on your account.
We'll need to get a CCTV footage of the thief as we know too little about his clothing, find and interrogate the witness and track your phone as well.
-What follow-up will there be on those proceedings?
-If there is enough evidence against the perpetrator, the local magistrates will issue a warrant and the law enforcement officer will make an arrest.
You need to know however that in case of lack of evidence or possibility to locate the alleged suspect the case will not be prosecuted and as a result closed.
- Will you keep me informed about how the investigation is going?
-Yes of course, you will be informed about its progress by email, and here you are - the details of the investigator who will be your contact and the incident number.
-I was sitting on the tube train and suddenly when I looked through the window a man wearing a balaclava whippsuddenly snatched my briefcase offfrom my hand.
It's better to place the adverb closer to the verb its describing.
Then he pushed his elbows through the crowd, almost forced ing his way through the closing door and fled.
When it's freeozedn you wont be held liable for any fraudulent charges on your account.
We'll need to get a CCTV footage of the thief as we know too little about his clothing, find and interrogate the witness and track your phone as well.
You need to know however that in case of lack of evidence or possibility toif we can not locate the alleged suspect, the case will not be prosecuted and as a result closed.
"alleged suspect" is redundant
- Will you keep me informed about how the investigation is goinggoes?
Because the investigation hasn't started yet, it's better to say "goes" instead of "is going"
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Theft victim |
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-Please give us an accurate account of what happened. |
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-I was sitting on the tube train and suddenly when I looked through the window a man wearing a balaclava whipped my briefcase off my hand. -I was sitting on the tube train and It's better to place the adverb closer to the verb its describing. |
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Then he pushed his elbows through the crowd, almost forced the closing door and fled. Then he pushed his elbows through the crowd, almost forc |
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-Was there anything valuable in your briefcase? |
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- My iPhone and my credit card. |
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- Who else saw the thief? |
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-A lady with a Maltese dog on her lap. |
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She was in front of me but seemed paralysed with fear. |
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- Please use this phone to call your bank and block the card. |
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When it's freezed you wont be held liable for any fraudulent charges on your account. When it's fr |
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We'll need to get a CCTV footage of the thief as we know too little about his clothing, find and interrogate the witness and track your phone as well. We'll need to get |
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-What follow-up will there be on those proceedings? |
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-If there is enough evidence against the perpetrator, the local magistrates will issue a warrant and the law enforcement officer will make an arrest. |
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You need to know however that in case of lack of evidence or possibility to locate the alleged suspect the case will not be prosecuted and as a result closed. You need to know however that in case of lack of evidence or "alleged suspect" is redundant |
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- Will you keep me informed about how the investigation is going? - Will you keep me informed about how the investigation Because the investigation hasn't started yet, it's better to say "goes" instead of "is going" |
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-Yes of course, you will be informed about its progress by email, and here you are - the details of the investigator who will be your contact and the incident number. |
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