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Tammy

Aug. 7, 2025

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The World Games 2025

The World Games 2025 is opening in Chengdu tonight.

This is the first time I've ever noticed this sports show.

The opening ceremony is amazing. I highly suggest you find some videos on YouTube or TikTok.

There are some cute panda dolls, stunning fireworks, and cheerful people from all over the world.


2025 年世界运动会今晚在成都开幕。

这是我第一次注意到这个体育盛会。

开幕式太精彩了。强烈建议你在 YouTube 或 TikTok 上找些视频看看。

这里有可爱的熊猫人偶、绚丽的烟花,还有来自世界各地欢快的人们。

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The World Games 2025

The World Games 2025 is opening in Chengdu tonight.

This is the first time I've ever noticed this sports show.

This is grammatically correct, but sounds a bit strange in English. You could say "This is the first time I've paid attention to this sports show," or "This is the first time I've heard about this sports show," or "This is my first time watching this sports show."

The opening ceremony is amazing.

When you say the game "is starting" tonight, it implies it hasn't started yet but is about to. That means you can't say the opening ceremony "is" amazing because it hasn't happened yet; you can say it "will" be amazing if you haven't seen it yet, or it "was" amazing if you're reporting after you watched it. If you know the ceremony will be amazing because someone told you this, you can the opening ceremony "is supposed to be" amazing.

If this is confusing, don't worry too much about it - I only mention this because your English is very good and this will help you sound more natural. But I can easily understand what you mean.

I highly suggest you find some videos on YouTube or TikTok.

There are some cute panda dolls, stunning fireworks, and cheerful people from all over the world.

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Tammy

Aug. 8, 2025

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Thank you so much!

I got what you meant in the feedback and learned a lot from it.

Have a nice day!

The World Games 2025

The World Games 2025 is opening in Chengdu tonight.

This is the first time I've ever noticed this sports show.

The opening ceremony is amazing.

I highly suggeststrongly recommend you find some videos on YouTube or TikTok.

“Highly suggest” isn’t idiomatic for me.

There are some cute panda [dolls], stunning fireworks, and cheerful people from all over the world.

“Dolls” probably isn’t right, but I’d have to see them to know what to call them.

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Chinese governments always go all-out for opening ceremonies, don’t they? I remember the opening of the 2008 Olympics in Beijing was unlike anything I’d ever seen!

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Tammy

Aug. 8, 2025

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对的!

我觉得这可能跟思维方式也有关系。

从春秋时期《左传》里的“曹刿论战”开始,中国人一直相信“一鼓作气,再而衰,三而竭”。所以一个精彩的开始,对我们而言,往往意味着充足的准备,乃至一鼓作气达到预期目标的底气。

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Tammy

Aug. 8, 2025

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上面这段话太复杂了,我用英语表达不来,但愿你能看懂,哈哈哈

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JoeTofu

Aug. 8, 2025

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我看得懂,而且觉得很有道理。谢谢你的解释😊

This is the first time I've ever noticedseen this sports show.

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Tammy

Aug. 8, 2025

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Thank you!

Have a nice day!

The World Games 2025


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The World Games 2025 is opening in Chengdu tonight.


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This is the first time I've ever noticed this sports show.


This is the first time I've ever noticedseen this sports show.

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This is the first time I've ever noticed this sports show.

This is grammatically correct, but sounds a bit strange in English. You could say "This is the first time I've paid attention to this sports show," or "This is the first time I've heard about this sports show," or "This is my first time watching this sports show."

The opening ceremony is amazing.


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The opening ceremony is amazing.

When you say the game "is starting" tonight, it implies it hasn't started yet but is about to. That means you can't say the opening ceremony "is" amazing because it hasn't happened yet; you can say it "will" be amazing if you haven't seen it yet, or it "was" amazing if you're reporting after you watched it. If you know the ceremony will be amazing because someone told you this, you can the opening ceremony "is supposed to be" amazing. If this is confusing, don't worry too much about it - I only mention this because your English is very good and this will help you sound more natural. But I can easily understand what you mean.

I highly suggest you find some videos on YouTube or TikTok.


I highly suggeststrongly recommend you find some videos on YouTube or TikTok.

“Highly suggest” isn’t idiomatic for me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are some cute panda dolls, stunning fireworks, and cheerful people from all over the world.


There are some cute panda [dolls], stunning fireworks, and cheerful people from all over the world.

“Dolls” probably isn’t right, but I’d have to see them to know what to call them.

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