Jan. 28, 2022
Watched these two movies in one day.
First time I watch both movies are long time ago.
Is it a good movie?
Yes, at that time, No, now.
I like topics about financial market.
Both movies are picking the biggest problem happened in US financial market as theme.
But movie is movie.
As a movie is really enjoyable to watch.
But if looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like how they do it.
The answer is no.
So, it was a good movie to watch but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch YouTube.
The wWolf / The Big Short
WI watched these two movies in one day / today.
FThe first time I watch bothed these movies arewas a long time ago.
Is it a good movie? / Are they good movies?
Yes,They were at thate time, No,but not now.
I like topics/films about the financial market.
Both movies are pickingchose the biggest problem that happened in US financial market as a theme.
Both movies chose the big problem of the US financial market as a theme.
ButYet a movie is movie.
Normally it's not right to start a sentence with 'But'.
As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.
But ifHowever if you are looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like, such as how they do it. -
The answer is no. / Then you won't enjoy the films.
So, it was a good movie to watch casually, but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch videos on YouTube.
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Well done :) I always suggest avoiding starting sentences with 'But', but since I've been doing that I've noticed it happening in English all the time. I was taught not to in school, and it wouldn't work in an essay. 'However' instead of 'But' usually works.
The wWolf /and The Big Short
Watched these two movies in one day.
FThe first time I watch bothed these movies arewas a long time ago.
Is it aAre they good movies?
Yes, aAt that time, No, now? Yes. Now? No.
I like topicsstuff about the financial market.
Both movies are pickinghave the biggest problem that happened in the US financial market as their theme.
But a movie is a movie.
As a movie it was really enjoyable to watch.
But if you're looking for the real money concepts or the “secrets” like how they do it, then it's not for you.
The answer is no.
So, it was a good movie to watch, but if you want to learn, maybeactually learn then you should just watch YouTube.
The wWolf / and The Big Short
Watched these two movies in one day.
FThe first time I watch both movies areit was a long time ago.
Is it a good movie?
Yes, at that time, No,not now.
I like topics about the financial market.
Both movies are pickingabout the biggest problem that happened in US financial market as theme.
But a movie is a movie.
As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.
But if you are looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like how they do it.
The answer is no.
So, it was a good movie to watch but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch YouTube.
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Well written
"The wWolf" / "The Big Short"
Watched these two movies in one day.
FI first time I watched both movies are long time ago.
Is it aAre they good movies?
You are talking about more than one movie, so you need to use the plural.
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The answer is no.
So, it was a goodthey are fun movies to watch, but if you want to learn about finance, maybe you should watch YouTube.
The wWolf / The Big Short
WI watched these two movies in one day.
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FThe first time I watched both movies arewas a long time ago.
Should be past tense if it was a long time ago.
Is it a good movie?
Yes, at that time, Nno, now.
I like topics aboutrelated to the financial market.
Or you could say “I like reading about the financial market.”
Both movies are picking the biggest problem that happened in the US financial market as a theme.
But a movie is just a movie.
As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.
But if you’re looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” likeof how they do it., you won’t find it.
So, it was a good movie to watch but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch YouTube.
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In the later parts it’s not clear which of the two movies you are talking about. If you still mean both of them, you need to maintain the plural.
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First time I watch both movies are long time ago.
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As a movie is really enjoyable to watch. As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch. As As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch. As a movie it was really enjoyable to watch. As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch. |
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The answer is no.
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The answer is no. / Then you won't enjoy the films. |
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