alexwong2164's avatar
alexwong2164

Jan. 28, 2022

0
The wolf / The Big Short

Watched these two movies in one day.

First time I watch both movies are long time ago.

Is it a good movie?

Yes, at that time, No, now.

I like topics about financial market.

Both movies are picking the biggest problem happened in US financial market as theme.

But movie is movie.

As a movie is really enjoyable to watch.

But if looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like how they do it.

The answer is no.

So, it was a good movie to watch but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch YouTube.

Corrections

The wWolf / The Big Short

WI watched these two movies in one day / today.

FThe first time I watch bothed these movies arewas a long time ago.

Is it a good movie? / Are they good movies?

Yes,They were at thate time, No,but not now.

I like topics/films about the financial market.

Both movies are pickingchose the biggest problem that happened in US financial market as a theme.

Both movies chose the big problem of the US financial market as a theme.

ButYet a movie is movie.

Normally it's not right to start a sentence with 'But'.

As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.

But ifHowever if you are looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like, such as how they do it. -

The answer is no. / Then you won't enjoy the films.

So, it was a good movie to watch casually, but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch videos on YouTube.

Feedback

Well done :) I always suggest avoiding starting sentences with 'But', but since I've been doing that I've noticed it happening in English all the time. I was taught not to in school, and it wouldn't work in an essay. 'However' instead of 'But' usually works.

alexwong2164's avatar
alexwong2164

Jan. 29, 2022

0

very good advise, thanks

0

The wolf /and The Big Short

Watched these two movies in one day.

FThe first time I watch bothed these movies arewas a long time ago.

Is it aAre they good movies?

Yes, aAt that time, No, now? Yes. Now? No.

I like topicsstuff about the financial market.

Both movies are pickinghave the biggest problem that happened in the US financial market as their theme.

But a movie is a movie.

As a movie it was really enjoyable to watch.

But if you're looking for the real money concepts or the “secrets” like how they do it, then it's not for you.

The answer is no.

So, it was a good movie to watch, but if you want to learn, maybeactually learn then you should just watch YouTube.

The wWolf / and The Big Short

Watched these two movies in one day.

FThe first time I watch both movies areit was a long time ago.

Is it a good movie?

Yes, at that time, No,not now.

I like topics about the financial market.

Both movies are pickingabout the biggest problem that happened in US financial market as theme.

But a movie is a movie.

As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.

But if you are looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like how they do it.

The answer is no.

So, it was a good movie to watch but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch YouTube.

Feedback

Well written

"The wWolf" / "The Big Short"

Watched these two movies in one day.

FI first time I watched both movies are long time ago.

Is it aAre they good movies?

You are talking about more than one movie, so you need to use the plural.

Yes, at that time,At the time I first watched them, they were. Now, now.

I like topics aboutrelated to the financial market.

Both movies are picking thchose biggest problem happened ins that arose in the US financial market as their theme.

But movie iss are movies.

As a movie iss, they are really enjoyable to watch.

But ifIf you are looking for the real money-related concepts or the “"secrets” like how they do it" about the market, they are not good.

The answer is no.

So, it was a goodthey are fun movies to watch, but if you want to learn about finance, maybe you should watch YouTube.

The wWolf / The Big Short

WI watched these two movies in one day.

Needs a subject

FThe first time I watched both movies arewas a long time ago.

Should be past tense if it was a long time ago.

Is it a good movie?

Yes, at that time, Nno, now.

I like topics aboutrelated to the financial market.

Or you could say “I like reading about the financial market.”

Both movies are picking the biggest problem that happened in the US financial market as a theme.

But a movie is just a movie.

As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.

But if you’re looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” likeof how they do it., you won’t find it.

So, it was a good movie to watch but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch YouTube.

Feedback

In the later parts it’s not clear which of the two movies you are talking about. If you still mean both of them, you need to maintain the plural.

The wolf / The Big Short


The wWolf / The Big Short

"The wWolf" / "The Big Short"

The wWolf / and The Big Short

The wolf /and The Big Short

The wWolf / The Big Short

Watched these two movies in one day.


WI watched these two movies in one day.

Needs a subject

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

WI watched these two movies in one day / today.

First time I watch both movies are long time ago.


FThe first time I watched both movies arewas a long time ago.

Should be past tense if it was a long time ago.

FI first time I watched both movies are long time ago.

FThe first time I watch both movies areit was a long time ago.

FThe first time I watch bothed these movies arewas a long time ago.

FThe first time I watch bothed these movies arewas a long time ago.

Is it a good movie?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Is it aAre they good movies?

You are talking about more than one movie, so you need to use the plural.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Is it aAre they good movies?

Is it a good movie? / Are they good movies?

Yes, at that time, No, now.


Yes, at that time,At the time I first watched them, they were. Now, now.

Yes, at that time, Nno, now.

Yes, at that time, No,not now.

Yes, aAt that time, No, now? Yes. Now? No.

Yes,They were at thate time, No,but not now.

I like topics about financial market.


I like topics aboutrelated to the financial market.

Or you could say “I like reading about the financial market.”

I like topics aboutrelated to the financial market.

I like topics about the financial market.

I like topicsstuff about the financial market.

I like topics/films about the financial market.

Both movies are picking the biggest problem happened in US financial market as theme.


Both movies are picking the biggest problem that happened in the US financial market as a theme.

Both movies are picking thchose biggest problem happened ins that arose in the US financial market as their theme.

Both movies are pickingabout the biggest problem that happened in US financial market as theme.

Both movies are pickinghave the biggest problem that happened in the US financial market as their theme.

Both movies are pickingchose the biggest problem that happened in US financial market as a theme.

Both movies chose the big problem of the US financial market as a theme.

But movie is movie.


But a movie is just a movie.

But movie iss are movies.

But a movie is a movie.

But a movie is a movie.

ButYet a movie is movie.

Normally it's not right to start a sentence with 'But'.

As a movie is really enjoyable to watch.


As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.

As a movie iss, they are really enjoyable to watch.

As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.

As a movie it was really enjoyable to watch.

As a movie it is really enjoyable to watch.

But if looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like how they do it.


But if you’re looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” likeof how they do it., you won’t find it.

But ifIf you are looking for the real money-related concepts or the “"secrets” like how they do it" about the market, they are not good.

But if you are looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like how they do it.

But if you're looking for the real money concepts or the “secrets” like how they do it, then it's not for you.

But ifHowever if you are looking for the real money concept or the “secrets” like, such as how they do it. -

The answer is no.


The answer is no.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The answer is no.

The answer is no. / Then you won't enjoy the films.

So, it was a good movie to watch but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch YouTube.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, it was a goodthey are fun movies to watch, but if you want to learn about finance, maybe you should watch YouTube.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, it was a good movie to watch, but if you want to learn, maybeactually learn then you should just watch YouTube.

So, it was a good movie to watch casually, but if you want to learn, maybe you should watch videos on YouTube.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium