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yone

March 21, 2025

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The Wicked

I went to the cinema "Wicked" a few days ago. I arrived there earlier. I needed to wait for opening time. I bought a popcorn before starting the film. I moved by the film. Everything was fantastic. Especially, two actress playing were overwhelming.

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The Wicked

I went to the cinema to see "Wicked" a few days ago.

I arrived there earlier.before the film

I needehad to wait for opening time.

I was moved by the film.

Especially, the two actress playing were overwhelming.

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yone

March 26, 2025

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Thank you very much.

The Wicked

I went to the cinema to see "Wicked" a few days ago.

I arrived there earliery.

'I arrived there earlier' is the wrong tense in this case.

I needed to wait for opening timeuntil it opened.

'I had to wait for it to open' would also work.

I bought a popcorn before starting the film started.

Popcorn is an uncountable noun. You could count every piece of popcorn, but as there are so many, we say it's a collective substance. You could say 'a bag of popcorn', as a bag is countable.

'starting the film' suggests that you are in control of when the film starts. If you watched it at home and got popcorn before pressing play, 'before starting the film' would make sense.

I moved by the filmThe film moved me.

Everything was fantastic.

Especially, the two actress playing's performance were overwhelming.

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Well written - excellent work!

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yone

March 24, 2025

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Thank you so much. I am glad that you explained my sentence. They are important for me.

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The Wicked

I went to the cinema "Wicked" a few days ago.


I went to the cinema to see "Wicked" a few days ago.

I went to the cinema to see "Wicked" a few days ago.

I arrived there earlier.


I arrived there earliery.

'I arrived there earlier' is the wrong tense in this case.

I arrived there earlier.before the film

I needed to wait for opening time.


I needed to wait for opening timeuntil it opened.

'I had to wait for it to open' would also work.

I needehad to wait for opening time.

I bought a popcorn before starting the film.


I bought a popcorn before starting the film started.

Popcorn is an uncountable noun. You could count every piece of popcorn, but as there are so many, we say it's a collective substance. You could say 'a bag of popcorn', as a bag is countable. 'starting the film' suggests that you are in control of when the film starts. If you watched it at home and got popcorn before pressing play, 'before starting the film' would make sense.

I moved by the film.


I moved by the filmThe film moved me.

I was moved by the film.

Everything was fantastic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Especially, two actress playing were overwhelming.


Especially, the two actress playing's performance were overwhelming.

Especially, the two actress playing were overwhelming.

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