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agatha24

May 8, 2023

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The White Cat

I have a white-cute cat in my house. I named him Kuput which means "white cat" in Indonesian. My cat likes to eat, he can eat five times a day. So that's why he is fat. He sleeps all day on top of my car. He has a friend named Kubu Kecil which means "grey-little cat".

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I have a white-cucute, white cat in my house.

White and cute are adjevtives so you don't hyphenate them, you list them separately.
Ex. My sweet, helpful, elderly grandmother asked me to help her clean up around the house.

I named him Kuput which means "white cat" in Indonesian.

My cat likes to eat, h. He can eat up to five times a day.

Both parts of the sentence are independent clauses (complete thoughts that can stand on their own). You must separate them with either a period or semicolon or link them with a coordinating conjunction.
Ex.
I have one sister. She does not live with me.
OR
I have one sister; she does not live with me.
OR
I have one sister, but she does not live with me.

So tThat's why he is fat.

He has a friend named Kubu Kecil which means "grey-little grey cat".

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Look into describing nouns with multiple adjectives :)

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agatha24

May 9, 2023

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Thank you :)

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The White Cat

I have a white-cucute white cat in my house.

In English, adjectives which are opinions (such as cute) come before adjectives describing colour (white).

I named him Kuput which means "white cat" in Indonesian.

My cat likes to eat,: he can eat five times a day.

So tThat's why he is fat.

He sleeps all day on top of my car.

He has a friend named Kubu Kecil which means "grey-little grey cat".

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Good job! Kuput and Kubu Kecil sound very cute :)

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agatha24

May 8, 2023

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Thank you :)

The White Cat

I have a white-cute cat in my houseMy house has a cute white cat.

I named him Kuput which means "white cat" in Indonesian.

My cat likes to eat, he can eateats up to five times a day.

So tThat' is why he is fat.

agatha24's avatar
agatha24

May 8, 2023

1

Thank you :)

The White Cat


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I have a white-cute cat in my house.


I have a white-cute cat in my houseMy house has a cute white cat.

I have a white-cucute white cat in my house.

In English, adjectives which are opinions (such as cute) come before adjectives describing colour (white).

I have a white-cucute, white cat in my house.

White and cute are adjevtives so you don't hyphenate them, you list them separately. Ex. My sweet, helpful, elderly grandmother asked me to help her clean up around the house.

I named him Kuput which means "white cat" in Indonesian.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I named him Kuput which means "white cat" in Indonesian.

My cat likes to eat, he can eat five times a day.


My cat likes to eat, he can eateats up to five times a day.

My cat likes to eat,: he can eat five times a day.

My cat likes to eat, h. He can eat up to five times a day.

Both parts of the sentence are independent clauses (complete thoughts that can stand on their own). You must separate them with either a period or semicolon or link them with a coordinating conjunction. Ex. I have one sister. She does not live with me. OR I have one sister; she does not live with me. OR I have one sister, but she does not live with me.

So that's why he is fat.


So tThat' is why he is fat.

So tThat's why he is fat.

So tThat's why he is fat.

He sleeps all day on top of my car.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He has a friend named Kubu Kecil which means "grey-little cat".


He has a friend named Kubu Kecil which means "grey-little grey cat".

He has a friend named Kubu Kecil which means "grey-little grey cat".

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