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The whales
The wales are called the kings of the Icean because of their height. The blue whale can grow up until 30 metters (it's so big). But they hare hunted for their oil and meat. In the 1800's it wasn't a problem because they were hunting whale with wooden boats which moves slowly and the whale can move until 30 km per hours. But, in the 1900's, a man invented a new weapon: the exploding weapon. And with the advances in technology, the boats becamed faster. So, there was more than 3 millions whales who were be killed. It was a turning point. But, the whales becamed popular for the specific song they make. Different associations like Green Peace created reforms to save them and it allowed to save a lot of whale species.
The whales are called the kKings oOf tThe IOcean because of their height.
Wales is a country of the UK, but whales are the animal you are referring to. Kings Of The Ocean is a title, so it should be capitalised
The blue whale can grow up until 30 metters (it's so big).
Wrong spelling of meters
But they hare hunted for their oil and meat.
Not hare, are.
In the 1800's it wasn't a problem because they were hunting whales with wooden boats, which movesd slowly, and the whales canould move until 30 km per hours.
We are talking about all whales, so whales. Since we are talking about the 1800s, it should be in the past tense moved. Can is used for all whales, and could is used for some, so could is more suitable. The until is redundant meaning useless.
But, in the 1900's, a man invented a new weapon: the exploding weapon.
And with the advances in technology, the boats becamed faster.
Became is already past tense so the d at the end is useless
So, there was more than 3 millions whales who were be killed.
No need for s at the end of a million unless there is no number of millions given like "3 million" and "Millions of whales". Were is already past tense so be is useless
It was a turning point.
But, the whales becamed popular for the specific song they make.
Again, became is already past tense so d is useless
Different associations like Green Ppeace created reforms to save them and it allowed to save a lot of whale species.
Greenpeace should be together
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Different associations like Green Peace created reforms to save them and it allowed to save a lot of whale species. Different associations like Green Greenpeace should be together |
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So, there was more than 3 millions whales who were be killed. So, there was more than 3 million No need for s at the end of a million unless there is no number of millions given like "3 million" and "Millions of whales". Were is already past tense so be is useless |
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It was a turning point. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But, the whales becamed popular for the specific song they make. But Again, became is already past tense so d is useless |
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The whales |
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The wales are called the kings of the Icean because of their height. The whales are called the Wales is a country of the UK, but whales are the animal you are referring to. Kings Of The Ocean is a title, so it should be capitalised |
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The blue whale can grow up until 30 metters (it's so big). The blue whale can grow up until 30 met Wrong spelling of meters |
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But they hare hunted for their oil and meat. But they Not hare, are. |
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In the 1800's it wasn't a problem because they were hunting whale with wooden boats which moves slowly and the whale can move until 30 km per hours. In the 1800's it wasn't a problem because they were hunting whales with wooden boats, which move We are talking about all whales, so whales. Since we are talking about the 1800s, it should be in the past tense moved. Can is used for all whales, and could is used for some, so could is more suitable. The until is redundant meaning useless. |
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But, in the 1900's, a man invented a new weapon: the exploding weapon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And with the advances in technology, the boats becamed faster. And with the advances in technology, the boats became Became is already past tense so the d at the end is useless |
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