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Aug. 8, 2025

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The weather in my city

I live in the very north of France, in a little town located not far away from the sea, so you can imagine that the weather isn't really sunny or calm.
My skin is extremely pale such as a vampire, since I never see the sun.
Honnestly, I can't say that I hate the weather here beacause I kind of feel the vibe of the rain hitting against my window.
Of course sometimes I miss the sun, we all need it to be alive and to get vitamines and energy.
To conclude, I love my hometown's weather, even if I would appreciate if the rain could stop for a while.


J'habite dans le nord de la France, dans une petite ville située pas très loin de la mer, donc tu peux imaginer que la météo n'est pas vraiment ensoleillée ni calme.
Ma peau est extremement pâle telle un vampire, vu que je ne vois jamais le soleil.
Honnêtement, je ne peux pas dire que je déteste la météo d'ici parce que je ressens plutôt bien le sentiment (jsp comment traduire ça mdr) de la pluie frappant contre ma vitre.
Evidemment que parfois le soleil me manque, nous en avons tous besoin pour vivre et pour avoir de la vitamine et de l'énergie.
Pour finir, j'adore la météo de ma ville même si j'apprécierais que la pluie s'arrête pour un moment.

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My skin is extremely pale such as a vampire, since I never see the sun.

Honnestly, I can't say that I hate the weather here beacause I kind of feel the vibe of the rain hitting against my window.

Honestly,because

Of course sometimes I miss the sun, we all need it to be alive and to get vitamines and energy.

Vitamins

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Its really good, just some misspelled words, but to be honest i get them wrong most of the time aswell.

The weather in my city


I live in the very north of France, in a little town located not far away from the sea, so you can imagine that the weather isn't really sunny or calm.


My skin is extremely pale such as a vampire, since I never see the sun shine.


Honnestly, I can't say that I hate the weather here beacause I kind of feel the vibe of the rain hitting against my window.


Honnestly, I can't say that I hate the weather here beacause I kind of feel the vibe of the rain hitting against my window.

Honestly,because

Of course sometimes I miss the sun, we all need it to be alive and to get vitamines and energy.


Of course sometimes I miss the sun, we all need it to be alive and to get vitamines and energy.

Vitamins

To conclude, I love my hometown's weather, even if I would appreciate if the rain could stop for a while.


My skin is extremely pale such as a vampire, since I never see the sun.


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