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Oct. 1, 2022

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I hate the cold weather because of the adaptation. I need always warm clothes, so I won't sick. That is not all. The worst on the weather is sometimes make it what I want as special in April. I mean weather is for nature important and for us people, but it is sometimes really annoying and even dangerously. To example hurricanes or thunders. That can destroy everything. But it gives also good weather how sunshine and cloudy. I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I buy me ice cream or go to the park. I love also cloudy the cool air is so soothing. But I think the weather is not so bad when one accustomed is.

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ToFor example, hurricanes or thunderslightening.

To example doesn't make sense, For example is better. I think when you mentioned thunder you meant lightening.

I hate the cold weather because of the adaptationtime needed to adjust.

I need always need warm clothes, so I won't be sick.

The worst onthing about the weather is sometimes (make it what I want as special in April.)

Not sure what you were trying to say here between the parentheses, so I suggest rewriting it.

I mean weather is important for nature important and for us people, but it is sometimes really annoying and even dangerously.

ToFor example, hurricanes orand thunders can destroy everything.

That can destroy everything.

But it givesthere can also be good weather how, like sunshine and cloudys.

I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I most. When the weather is like this, I'll buy me ice cream or go to the park.

I love alsoalso love it when it's cloudy; the cool air is so soothing.

But I think the weather is not so bad when one gets accustomed isto it.

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Great!

I hate the cold weather because of the adaptatjustment periond.

I need always need warm clothes, so I won't get sick.

TAnd that i's not all.

The worst onthing about theis weather is sometimes make it what I wantI want it to be as special as it is in April.

I mean weather is for nature importantimportant for nature, and for us people, but it is sometimes it's really annoying and even dangerously.

ToFor example, example hurricanes or thunderstorms that can destroy everything.

That can destroy everything.-

But it givethere is also good weather how sunshine and cloudy.

I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I buy me most. When it's sunny, I buy myself an ice cream or go to the park.

I love alsoalso love when it's cloudy t. The cool air is so soothing.

But I think the weather is not so bad when one accustomed isyou're used to it.

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Good work!

the weather

I hate the cold weather because of theit's hard to adaptation.

I need always warm clothes, so I won't get sick.

You could also say, "So I won't become sick."

That is not all.

The worst onthing about the weather is sometimes make it what I want as specialit is different in April.

I wasn't sure about the second half of this sentence, but I hope this helps.

I mean, weather is important for nature important and for us people, but it is sometimes really annoying and even dangerously.

ToFor example, hurricanes or thunderstorms.

"Thunder" just refers to the sound made by lightning, and it isn't used in the plural.

For example:
"I can hear thunder in the distance."

Thatey can destroy everything.

You can also use just one sentence and say, "For example, hurricanes and thunderstorms can destroy everything."

But it givethere is also good weather howwith sunshine and cloudys.

I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I buy me most. Then I can buy myself ice cream or go to the park.

I love alsoalso love cloudy theand cool air. It is so soothing.

But I think the weather is not so bad when one gets accustomed isto it.

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Good job! Bad weather makes me nervous because of all the damage it can cause. I love warm summer months the best. :)

the weather


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I hate the cold weather because of the adaptation.


I hate the cold weather because of theit's hard to adaptation.

I hate the cold weather because of the adaptatjustment periond.

I hate the cold weather because of the adaptationtime needed to adjust.

I need always warm clothes, so I won't sick.


I need always warm clothes, so I won't get sick.

You could also say, "So I won't become sick."

I need always need warm clothes, so I won't get sick.

I need always need warm clothes, so I won't be sick.

That is not all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

TAnd that i's not all.

The worst on the weather is sometimes make it what I want as special in April.


The worst onthing about the weather is sometimes make it what I want as specialit is different in April.

I wasn't sure about the second half of this sentence, but I hope this helps.

The worst onthing about theis weather is sometimes make it what I wantI want it to be as special as it is in April.

The worst onthing about the weather is sometimes (make it what I want as special in April.)

Not sure what you were trying to say here between the parentheses, so I suggest rewriting it.

I mean weather is for nature important and for us people, but it is sometimes really annoying and even dangerously.


I mean, weather is important for nature important and for us people, but it is sometimes really annoying and even dangerously.

I mean weather is for nature importantimportant for nature, and for us people, but it is sometimes it's really annoying and even dangerously.

I mean weather is important for nature important and for us people, but it is sometimes really annoying and even dangerously.

To example hurricanes or thunders.


ToFor example, hurricanes or thunderstorms.

"Thunder" just refers to the sound made by lightning, and it isn't used in the plural. For example: "I can hear thunder in the distance."

ToFor example, example hurricanes or thunderstorms that can destroy everything.

ToFor example, hurricanes orand thunders can destroy everything.

ToFor example, hurricanes or thunderslightening.

To example doesn't make sense, For example is better. I think when you mentioned thunder you meant lightening.

That can destroy everything.


Thatey can destroy everything.

You can also use just one sentence and say, "For example, hurricanes and thunderstorms can destroy everything."

That can destroy everything.-

That can destroy everything.

But it gives also good weather how sunshine and cloudy.


But it givethere is also good weather howwith sunshine and cloudys.

But it givethere is also good weather how sunshine and cloudy.

But it givesthere can also be good weather how, like sunshine and cloudys.

I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I buy me ice cream or go to the park.


I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I buy me most. When it's sunny, I buy myself an ice cream or go to the park.

I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I buy me most. Then I can buy myself ice cream or go to the park.

I like too most the sunshine and the warm air then I most. When the weather is like this, I'll buy me ice cream or go to the park.

I love also cloudy the cool air is so soothing.


I love alsoalso love cloudy theand cool air. It is so soothing.

I love alsoalso love when it's cloudy t. The cool air is so soothing.

I love alsoalso love it when it's cloudy; the cool air is so soothing.

But I think the weather is not so bad when one accustomed is.


But I think the weather is not so bad when one gets accustomed isto it.

But I think the weather is not so bad when one accustomed isyou're used to it.

But I think the weather is not so bad when one gets accustomed isto it.

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