July 6, 2025
The Water Guy
In recent years, I stopped drinking soft drinks and turned towards water. It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially than soft drinks. In the morning I start with some water before the breakfast to refresh and hydrate myself. But I also often drink tea in the morning if I have enough time because I'm a tea lover. Sometimes, when I have to go to the bakery in the morning, I buy a coffee, but I drink coffee just for the smell and taste.
In recent years, I stopped drinking soft drinks and (instead) turned towards water.
The instead is optional but I think it's more natural here.
It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially than soft drinks.
In the morning I start with some water before the breakfast to refresh and hydrate myself.
In recent years, I have stopped drinking soft drinks and have turned towards water instead.
More natural
It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially than soft drinks.
Unnecessary word
In the morning I start with some water before the breakfast to refresh and hydrate myself.
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Pretty good!
July 6, 2025
Thank you.
The Water Guy
In recent years, I stopped drinking soft drinks and turned towards water.
It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially than soft drinks.
No need to repeat "than"
In the morning, I start with some water before the breakfast to refresh and hydrate myself.
But I also often drink tea in the morning if I have enough time because I'm a tea -lover.
Added a hyphen for tea-lover as this is a compound noun (combination of the words tea + lover to create a specific meaning = someone who loves tea).
Sometimes, when I have to go to the bakery in the morning, I buy a coffee, but I only drink coffee jusit for the smell and taste.
More natural
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Good job. Tea and coffee are healthy in moderation
July 6, 2025
Thank you for your detailed corrections again.
I knew that, I could have expressed myself a little better. :)
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But I also often drink tea in the morning if I have enough time because I'm a tea lover. But I also often drink tea in the morning if I have enough time because I'm a tea Added a hyphen for tea-lover as this is a compound noun (combination of the words tea + lover to create a specific meaning = someone who loves tea). |
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Sometimes, when I have to go to the bakery in the morning, I buy a coffee, but I drink coffee just for the smell and taste. Sometimes, when I have to go to the bakery in the morning, I buy a coffee, but I only drink More natural |
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It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially than soft drinks. It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially No need to repeat "than" It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially Unnecessary word It's more refreshing and healthy than the other options, especially |
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