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The Village Old Woman's Stupid Speeches Flow Like a River

To east from our village lives old lady, she is ninty years old. She eats only lean food, everyday reads preayers and thus she have gained favor of Guanyin bodhisattva.
One day a bodhisattva came to her in a dream and said: "You are devoted to God with all your sole but you don't have any grandchilds. I told about you to Jasper lord and he said that you're going to have a grandson!" Actually this old woman had a son and this son had a son too, but he died when he was either seventeen or eighteen years old. You should have seen how he was mourned!


To the east of our village, there lives an old lady who is ninety years old. She only eats lean food. Everyday she reads prayers and thus has gained the favor of the Guanyin bodhisattva.
One day, a bodhisattva came to her in a dream and said: "You are devoted to God with your entire sole, but you don't have any grandchildren. I told Jasper lord about you. He said: You're going to have a grandson!" Actually, this old woman had a son and the son had a son, too. However he died at either seventeen or eighteen years old. You should have seen how he was mourned!

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To the east ofrom our village , there lives an old lady, she who is ninety years old.

She eats onlyonly eats lean food, e. Everyday she reads preayers and thus she havehas gained the favor of the Guanyin bodhisattva.

Additionally, you can instead also say "and has apparently gained the favor of. . ." Without getting too into religious debate, these things can be presented as if it were hearsay.

One day, a bodhisattva came to her in a dream and said: "You are devoted to God with all your soleentire soul, but you don't have any grandchildsren.

I told Jasper about you to Jasper lord and he said that y, Lord. He said: "You're going to have a grandson!"

Actually. this old woman had a son and thise son had a son, too, but he died when he was. However, he died at either seventeen or eighteen years old.

You should have seen how he was mourned!

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tonya

Sept. 1, 2024

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The village Old Woman's Stupid speeches Flow Like a River


To east from our village lives old lady, she is ninty years old.


To the east ofrom our village , there lives an old lady, she who is ninety years old.

She eats only lean food, everyday reads preayers and thus she have gained favor of Guanyin bodhisattva.


She eats onlyonly eats lean food, e. Everyday she reads preayers and thus she havehas gained the favor of the Guanyin bodhisattva.

Additionally, you can instead also say "and has apparently gained the favor of. . ." Without getting too into religious debate, these things can be presented as if it were hearsay.

One day a bodhisattva came to her in a dream and said: "You are devoted to God with all your sole but you don't have any grandchilds.


One day, a bodhisattva came to her in a dream and said: "You are devoted to God with all your soleentire soul, but you don't have any grandchildsren.

I told about you to Jasper lord and he said that you're going to have a grandson!"


I told Jasper about you to Jasper lord and he said that y, Lord. He said: "You're going to have a grandson!"

Actually this old woman had a son and this son had a son too, but he died when he was either seventeen or eighteen years old.


Actually. this old woman had a son and thise son had a son, too, but he died when he was. However, he died at either seventeen or eighteen years old.

You should have seen how he was mourned!


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The village Old Woman's Stupid Speeches Flow Like a River


The Village Old Woman's Stupid Speeches Flow Like a River


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