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yone

March 3, 2025

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The turn of the screw

I watched a film titled " The turn of the screw". Of course, I know Henry James who was the film 's author .I like another his work. I couldn't stop watching it last night because I feared it.Especially, A character of boy was weird. I was lack of sleep today.

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I watched a film titled " The turn of the screw".

Of course, I know Henry James who was the film 's author .I. I also like another his works by him.

The first sentence while being grammatically correct, suggests that you know Henry James personally, which is unlikely as he lived in the late 19th and early 20th century; also I think he wrote the books that the film is based on, he didn't write the film or the script for the film, because cinema hadn't yet been invented when he was alive. So I wonder whether you meant to write something a little different?

I couldn't stop watching it last night because I feared it.it was scary. Especially, A the character of the boy was weird.

I was was so tired today due to lack of sleep today.

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You're doing so well, keep trying, these are difficult things to explain!

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yone

March 13, 2025

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Yes, I haven't met him. so, I would like to say like your sentence.
Thank you so your kindness.

The tTurn of the sScrew

In films titles we use capital letters to start words, except small ones like a, in, the, of etc

I watched a film titled " The tTurn of the sScrew".

Of course, I know Henry James who was the film 's author . I like another of his works.

I couldn't stop watching it last night because I fewas scared by it. Especially, A the character of a boy who was weird.

I was lack ofing sleep today.

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Keep going. I need to write more too!

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yone

March 4, 2025

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I learned how to write English sentences from you every time. I keep writing too. Thank you very much!

The turn of the screw


The tTurn of the sScrew

In films titles we use capital letters to start words, except small ones like a, in, the, of etc

I watched a film titled " The turn of the screw".


I watched a film titled " The tTurn of the sScrew".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Of course, I know Henry James who was the film 's author .I like another his work.


Of course, I know Henry James who was the film 's author . I like another of his works.

Of course, I know Henry James who was the film 's author .I. I also like another his works by him.

The first sentence while being grammatically correct, suggests that you know Henry James personally, which is unlikely as he lived in the late 19th and early 20th century; also I think he wrote the books that the film is based on, he didn't write the film or the script for the film, because cinema hadn't yet been invented when he was alive. So I wonder whether you meant to write something a little different?

I couldn't stop watching it last night because I feared it.Especially, A character of boy was weird.


I couldn't stop watching it last night because I fewas scared by it. Especially, A the character of a boy who was weird.

I couldn't stop watching it last night because I feared it.it was scary. Especially, A the character of the boy was weird.

I was lack of sleep today.


I was lack ofing sleep today.

I was was so tired today due to lack of sleep today.

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