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"overturn the status quo" sounds like there's a specific status quo you have in mind.

InAs for my concerns, firstly, his policy can undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity.

Minorities, such as people like LGBTQ+LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US.

"such as" and "like" are a little redundant as they both read here like giving an example. LGBTQ+ is generally used as an adjective.

As Christianity does not affect in Japanese politics, abortion is never considered murder.

Thirdly, Trump issued terrible executive orders and carried them out.

All we Japanese (people) can do is watch.

Generally, Japanese (and other nationalities ending in -ese like Chinese or Sudanese) is used as an adjective, not as a noun.

Although it's a problem in another country's problem, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo.

In my concern, firstly, Firstly, I'm concerned that his policy canies may undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity.

Minorities, such as people like LGBTQ+LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US.

Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a legal partnership system.

I'm unsure if I should have erased "system" here because I don't know how Japan refers to partnerships.

The trends in the US could push Japanese policies back.

Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a huge shame to most pregnantthreat to women who don't want to give birth.

As Christianity does not affect in Japanese politics, abortion iwas never considered murder.

Thirdly, Trump issued terrible executive orders and had them carried out.

Although it's a problem in another country, it may be of concern to us Japanese as well, because the influential President Trump has put forward policies that could overturn the status quo.

In my concern, firstly, My first concern is that his policy can undermine the current global trend towards emphasizing diversity.

You can also say, "Firstly, in my opinion, his policy can..."

In his inaugural speech, he clearly stated that there are only men and women in the world.

You have a tendency to add 2 spaces instead of 1, so please keep a lookout for that! Oftentimes, this is the only correction I have to make.

Minorities, such as people like LGBTQ+LGBTQ+ people, will likely face tough times in the US.

Since you're already saying "such," you don't need to say "like" as well since you're already making the comparison.

In Japan, transgender issues are just now gradually coming to light, and public awareness is increasing.

This correction isn't necessary, but I think it gets across the point better.

Same-sex marriage has only just begun to be recognized as a partnership system.,

The and these trends in the US could push Japan back.

I think it's better to connect these two sentences, as they share the same idea: "Japan is making progress, but because of the US, this progress will be set back."

Secondly, Trump does not support abortion, which is a huge shame to mostbig issue for pregnant women who don't want to give birth.

"A huge shame" is quite an understatement, I would say. "Shame" makes me think of something that's a minor inconvience *most* of the time. And since "most" pregnant women don't necessary want an abortion, I took it out for clarity.

Thirdly, Trump has issued terrible executive orders and carried out.

I think it's unnecessary to add the last part, but you could also say, "Thirdly, Trump has issued terrible executive orders that he has both intends to carry out and already has carried out." If someone were saying this in a speech, you could put stress on a few words to make it sound more dire.

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SUGGESTION: Specify which orders which "terrible."

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Will the US.S. become an authoritarian state (like Russia)?