Sept. 3, 2024
The triple happiness of hike
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition. You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
I enjoy making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.
The first one is the time when I was hiking. It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.
The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike. It's about the pleasant memories.
The third one is the time when I share with my old friends and you folks about it. At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had.
刚刚上传了一小段上周六山洞探险的视频。你可以在这里观看:https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
我喜欢作这个视频，因为它让我觉得我又回到了山上。
每次我远足，我都能获得三倍的快乐。
第一次是我徒步的时候。这是关于自然，山，植物和我身边的人。
第二个是当我看徒步的视频和照片时。这是关于愉快的回忆。
第三个是我与我的老朋友和你们分享时。这时候，我希望你能在我所曾拥有的大自然中度过一段美好的时光。
The triple happiness of hike建议标题：Threefold hiking joy
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
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I enjoyed making this video because it makeshelped me feel like I amas if I were back on the mountain again.
OPTION A: Every time I hike, I can gain triplehreefold happiness.¶
OPTION B: Each time I hike, I gain much happiness.
选项B听起来比选项A更自然。（选项A感觉像是直接翻译。）
The first one is the timesource of joy is when I wasam hiking.
It's about natureThen I can enjoy the natural environment, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.
The second one is the timesource of joy is when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike.
It'That brings about the pleasant memories.
The third one is the time when I sharsource of happiness is sharing information about the hike with my old friends and you folks about itonline.
At this moment, I hope you can have a niceI hope you can get a taste/glimpse of the wonderful time in the nature I have had.
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一个漂亮的视频！我喜欢音乐。
你用什么视频编辑器？
视频编辑现在是我最大的爱好。
The triple happiness of hikeing
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
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I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
Every time I hike, I can gain triplhree times the happiness.
The first one is the time when I wasI spend hiking.
It's about can appreciate nature, the mountains, the plants, and the people witharound me.
The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures I took of the hike.
It's about relive the pleasant memories.
The third one is the time when I share them with my old friends and you folks about it.
At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature as I have had.
Sept. 5, 2024
Thank you so much!
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
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I enjoyed making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
是以前的事，不是现在的。
Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness'm always elated.
This is better
The first one is the time when I was hiking.
It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.
It's about the pleasant memories.
At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had.
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Nature is beautiful 😍
The triple happinesThree Joys of hHikeing
"The Triple Happiness of Hiking" is also ok, or "The Threefold Joys of Hiking".
"Hiking" is the important change.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
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I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
You have completed the action of making the video so you can use past tense.
Every time I hike, I can gain triple the happiness.
You can also say, "Every time I hike, I gain happiness in three ways."
The first one is the time when I wasam hiking.
At this moment, I hope you can shavre ain nice time in the nature that I have had.
Sept. 4, 2024
Thanks a lot for your corrections and feedback!
The tTriple hHappiness of ha Hike
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk I enjoy making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
Every time I hike, I can gain triple amount of happiness.
The first one is the time when I was hiking.
It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.
The second one is the time when I watch the videos and see pictures of the hike.
It's about the pleasant memories.
The third one is the time when I share with my old friends and you folks about it.
At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have had.
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You love to hike a lot. I do as well and your videos look pleasant.
Sept. 4, 2024
Thank you so much!
I'm really glad that you enjoy hiking too. Maybe our paths will cross on a trail one day!
Sept. 4, 2024
You're welcome. I hope we can hike together.
Sept. 5, 2024
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If you come to East China one day, I can take you hiking in the mountains.
The triple happiness of a hike
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition to a cave.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
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I enjoyed making this video because it makes me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.
The first one is about the time when I was hiking.
It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.
The second one is about the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike.
It's about the pleasant memories.
The third one is about the time when I share it with my goold friends and you folks about it.
At this moment, I hope you can have as nice time in the nature I have had.
Sept. 3, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
The triple happiness of hike[hiking / a hike / the hike]
"The triple happiness of hiking" = You are talking about the activity of hiking
"The triple happiness of a hike" = You are talking about the experience of taking a hike
"The triple happiness of the (or 'my') hike" = You are talking about a specific hike, or the hike you just went on
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
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I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.
It might be more clear to say "triple the happiness" or "thrice the happiness".
The first one is the time when I was hiking.
This grammar is correct, but here is a more native way to say it: "The first one comes from when I hike".
It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.
The second one is the time when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike.
Again, let's change "is the time" to "comes from" -- "The second one comes from when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike."
It's about the pleasant memories.
The third one is the timecomes from when I share my experience with my old friends and, as well as you folks about it.
The phrase "my old friends and you folks" sounds a little unnatural, so I changed the sentence to make it sound more natural.
At this moment, I hope you can have a nice time in the nature I have halike I did.
I corrected your grammar for this sentence, but I think the better way to say it is: "I hope I can convey to you the nice time I had in nature."
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Good job! I also like hiking, so I understand your triple happiness!
Sept. 3, 2024
Thanks for your corrections and feedback!
Hiking is a pleasant thing indeed.
The triple happiness of a hike
I just uploaded a short video of last Saturday's cave expedition.
You can watch it here: https://youtu.be/-PgRygK9Jfk
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I enjoyed making this video because it makesde me feel like I am back on the mountain again.
Every time I hike, I can gain triple happiness.
Not gramatically incorrect, but I think based on the context of what follows to rephrase it as "Every time I hike, I experience 3 moments of happiness". "Triple happiness" sounds a bit odd.
The first one is the timeoccurs when I wasgo hiking.
Following the note above, I think it's best if it's reworded this way.
It's about nature, the mountains, the plants and the people with me.
The second one is the timehappens when I watch the videos and pictures of the hike.
The third one is the time when I share about it with my old friends and you folks about it.
At this moment, I hope you can have as nice of a time in the nature as I have had.
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I watched your video, it was stunning and video. It seems like it was a an exciting experience and made me want to be there as well!
Sept. 3, 2024
Thank you so much!
Welcome to come to Eastern China someday!
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