Sept. 18, 2023
The Trip to Hong Kong
Speaking of traveling to Hong Kong, I recalled a few very interesting things during the trip I visited Hong Kong last n 2010.
When other tourists and I were going to leave Shenzhen Customs, at a grocery store, the tour guide said to us, "Hong Kong people can't speak Mandarin, they only speak Cantonese or English, the goods in Hong Kong are very expensive, and a disease called 'Hong Kong feet' is very popular, therefore you guys would better buy enough daily necessities here, otherwise, you would have a tough time in Hong Kong." It was the first time we went to Hong Kong. We knew nothing about Hong Kong, so we bought a lot of things at that store.
That was also the first time that I knew a lot of international famous luxury brands because the Hong Kong guide kept introducing those brands to us and strongly recommended us to buy one.
That was also the first time I ate the most expensive box lunch which cost me 45 rmb.
What left a deeper impression on me during the trip was the tall buildings, narrow streets, fewer people on the streets and the shining lights on the tall buildings at night.
I remember I bought a video camera in a shop. After we entered the shop, the shop owner let us sit down. While he introduced his products, he took videos of us, and then he played the video on a big screen on the wall, so everyone saw themselves in the video. Some people smiled very beautifully in the video. Because the video was very clear and looked nice, many people bought his video camera.
After I got home, I looked for information about that video camera, but I couldn't find any of its manufacturing information. Some people told me that the camera must be assembled in Hong Kong. I used it a few times, but I don't when I lost it.
I took a lot of pictures and videos of Hong Kong during that trip. I stored them on my phone and on the Internet, but now, I don't know where they are at all. Time is like an eraser, it can erase everything, the good and the bad.
The Trip to Hong Kong
Speaking of traveling to Hong Kong, I recalled a few very interesting things that happened during the trip I visitedtook to Hong Kong last in 2010.
When other tourists and I were going to leave Shenzhen Customs, at a grocery store, the tour guide said to us, "Hong Kong people can't speak Mandarin, they only speak Cantonese or English, the goods in Hong Kong are very expensive, and a disease called 'Hong Kong feet' is very popularrevalent, therefore you guys would better buy enough daily necessities here, otherwise, you wouldill have a tough time in Hong Kong."
"Popular" has a positive connotation, like people want to get Hong Kong feet.
It was the first time we went to Hong Kong.
We knew nothing about Hong Kong, so we bought a lot of things at that store.
That was also the first time that I knewlearned about a lot of international famous luxury brands because the Hong Kong guide kept introducing those brands to us and strongly recommended us to buy onewe buy something from them.
"I came to know about" could also work instead of "I knew".
"Recommended us to buy one" sounds like he recommended you buy an entire brand, rather than an item from the brand.
I remember I bought a video camera in a shop.
After we entered the shop, the shop owner let us sit down.
While he introduced his products, he took videos of us, and then he played the video on a big screen on the wall, so everyone saw themselves in the video.
Some people smiled very beautifully in the video.
Because the video was very clear and looked nice, many people bought his video camera.
After I got home, I looked for information about that video camera, but I couldn't find any of its manufacturing information.
Some people told me that the camera must be assembled in Hong Kong.
I used it a few times, but I don't know when I lost it.
I took a lot of pictures and videos of Hong Kong during that trip.
I stored them on my phone and on the Internet, but now, I don't know where they are at all.
Time is like an eraser, it can erase everything, the good and the bad.
Sept. 19, 2023
Speaking of traveling to Hong Kong, I recalled a few very interesting things that happened during the trip I visitedtook to Hong Kong last in 2010.
The trip I took to somewhere.
Sept. 19, 2023
When other tourists and I were going to leave Shenzhen Customs, at a grocery store, the tour guide said to us, "Hong Kong people can't speak Mandarin, they only speak Cantonese or English, the goods in Hong Kong are very expensive, and a disease called 'Hong Kong feet' is very popularrevalent, therefore you guys would better buy enough daily necessities here, otherwise, you wouldill have a tough time in Hong Kong."
Prevalent.
Sept. 19, 2023
That was also the first time that I knewlearned about a lot of international famous luxury brands because the Hong Kong guide kept introducing those brands to us and strongly recommended us to buy onewe buy something from them.
Learn about, came to know about.
Sept. 19, 2023
Thank you very much.
Speaking of traveling to Hong Kong, I recalled a few very interesting things during the tripime I visited Hong Kong last in 2010.
When other tourists and I were going to leave Shenzhen Customs, at a grocery store, the tour guide said to us, "Hong Kong people can't speak Mandarin, they only speak Cantonese or English, the goods in Hong Kong are very expensive, and a disease called 'Hong Kong feet' is very popular, t. Therefore you guys would better buy enough daily necessities here, otherwise, you wouldill have a tough time in Hong Kong."
The sentence was too long.
In the beginning, "Before" might make more sense than "When".
It was the first time we went to Hong Kong.
We knew nothing about Hong Kong, so we bought a lot of things at that store.
That was also the first time that I knew a lot of international famous luxury brands, because the Hong Kong guide kept introducing those brands to us and strongly recommended us to buy one.
That was also the first time I ate the most expensive box lunch which cost me 45 rmb.
This sentence could be clearer. Was it the most expensive boxed lunch you had ever eaten up until then, or did you get the most expensive box lunch option?
I remember I bought a video camera in a shop.
After we entered the shop, the shop owner let us sit down.
While he introduced his products, he took videos of us, and then he played the video on a big screen on the wall, so everyone saw themselves in the video.
Some people smiled very beautifully in the video.
Because the video was very clear and looked nice, many people bought his video camera.
After I got home, I looked for information about that video camera, but I couldn't find any of its manufacturing information.
Some people told me that the camera must be assembled in Hong Kong.
I used it a few times, but I don't when until I lost it.
Maybe "..., but I don't know when I lost it." ?
I took a lot of pictures and videos of Hong Kong during that trip.
I stored them on my phone and on the Internet, but now, I don't know where they are at all.
Feedback
This was a very interesting read! It's sad that you lost the videos.
Sept. 18, 2023
I used it a few times, but I don't when until I lost it.
Yes, the original sentence was “I don’t know when I lost it.” Somehow, the word “know” was missing.
Sept. 18, 2023
That was also the first time I ate the most expensive box lunch which cost me 45 rmb.
That was also the first time I ever had the most expensive box lunch by then, which cost me 45 rmb. Does this sentence make sense? At that time, a box lunch in the mainland China only cost around 5 rmb.
Sept. 18, 2023
谢谢你的修改。
Sept. 19, 2023
That was also the first time I ever had the most expensive box lunch by then, which cost me 45 rmb. Does this sentence make sense? At that time, a box lunch in the mainland China only cost around 5 rmb.
That might be okay, but it doesn't sound right to me. Maybe
"That was also the most expensive box lunch I had ever had, which cost me 45 RMB."
The "first time" isn't needed.
Sept. 19, 2023
I had ever had. Thank you.
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When other tourists and I were going to leave Shenzhen Customs, at a grocery store, the tour guide said to us, "Hong Kong people can't speak Mandarin, they only speak Cantonese or English, the goods in Hong Kong are very expensive, and a disease called 'Hong Kong feet' is very popular, therefore you guys would better buy enough daily necessities here, otherwise, you would have a tough time in Hong Kong." When other tourists and I were going to leave Shenzhen Customs, at a grocery store, the tour guide said to us, "Hong Kong people can't speak Mandarin, they only speak Cantonese or English, the goods in Hong Kong are very expensive, and a disease called 'Hong Kong feet' is very popular The sentence was too long. In the beginning, "Before" might make more sense than "When". When other tourists and I were going to leave Shenzhen Customs, at a grocery store, the tour guide said to us, "Hong Kong people can't speak Mandarin, they only speak Cantonese or English, the goods in Hong Kong are very expensive, and a disease called 'Hong Kong feet' is very p "Popular" has a positive connotation, like people want to get Hong Kong feet. |
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We knew nothing about Hong Kong, so we bought a lot of things at that store. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That was also the first time that I knew a lot of international famous luxury brands because the Hong Kong guide kept introducing those brands to us and strongly recommended us to buy one. That was also the first time that I knew a lot of international famous luxury brands, because the Hong Kong guide kept introducing those brands to us and strongly recommended us to buy one. That was also the first time that I "I came to know about" could also work instead of "I knew". "Recommended us to buy one" sounds like he recommended you buy an entire brand, rather than an item from the brand. |
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That was also the first time I ate the most expensive box lunch which cost me 45 rmb. That was also the first time I ate the most expensive box lunch which cost me 45 rmb. This sentence could be clearer. Was it the most expensive boxed lunch you had ever eaten up until then, or did you get the most expensive box lunch option? |
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What left a deeper impression on me during the trip was the tall buildings, narrow streets, fewer people on the streets and the shining lights on the tall buildings at night. |
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After we entered the shop, the shop owner let us sit down. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While he introduced his products, he took videos of us, and then he played the video on a big screen on the wall, so everyone saw themselves in the video. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people smiled very beautifully in the video. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because the video was very clear and looked nice, many people bought his video camera. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After I got home, I looked for information about that video camera, but I couldn't find any of its manufacturing information. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people told me that the camera must be assembled in Hong Kong. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used it a few times, but I don't when I lost it. I used it a few times Maybe "..., but I don't know when I lost it." ? I used it a few times, but I don't know when I lost it. |
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I took a lot of pictures and videos of Hong Kong during that trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I stored them on my phone and on the Internet, but now, I don't know where they are at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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