The Town I Live In

I live in a small town in Brazil (Aaround 70 thousand inhabitants).

It is usually considered better English writing style to either write 70,000, or seventy thousand. Not a huge deal though, most people won't care unless you are writing in an academic setting.

I know that there are a lot of countries that suffer the natural disasters like earthquakes and tsunamis, but here in Brazil, we don't have such huge calamities, which is one of the best parts of living in here.

The town I live in is surrounded by hills, and it makes the city feels more connected to the nature.

Even though the town is known byfor its historical importance, having a lot of houses with older architecture, when you live inside the town, the "magic" just disappears, and I just look at them as old boring houses that are hindering the development of a more sophisticated and modern city.

There are not many places to go and things to do in my town.

It sounds slightly off without "to go" here because you wouldn't say "places to do." Omitting the verb kind of implies you're using it for both of the objects you're referring to. Example: "We have lots of chairs and couches to sit on."

The best momenttime of the year is during winter.

"Moment" is not the word I'd use to talk about an entire season. I would expect you were about to mention a specific holiday or celebration that happens during winter. Alternatively, you could say "The best moments of the year happen during winter."

Unfortunately, I'm highly likely to feel queasy during car or bus traveling because of the annoying motion sickness that I feel more than the othersmost people.

Here, if you say "the others", it is implied that you have mentioned someone else you're travelling with, but you haven't so I think "most people" or just "most" fits better.

I live in a small town in Brazil (Aaround 70 thousand inhabitants).

The town I live in is surrounded by hills and make the city feels more connected to the nature.

Even though the town is known byfor its historical importance, and having a lot of houses with older architecture, when you live inside the town, the "magic" just disappears and I just look at them as old, boring houses that are hindering the development of a more sophisticated and modern city.

This is a bit of a run on sentence. You can break it up to form complete sentences like this. "Even though the town is known for its historical importance and homes with older architecture, once you live in the town, the "magic" disappears. I just look at them as old, boring houses that are hindering the development of a more sophisticated and modern city."

This year's event was Japan themed and i. It was pretty cool because I personally like Japan's culture and food, and I had even studied Japanese before.

Another run on sentence. Use periods instead of commas to form shorter, complete sentences.

Unfortunately, I'm high likely to feel queasy during car or bus travelingrides because of the annoying motion sickness that I feel more than the others.

The Town I Live In

I live in a small town in Brazil (Around 70 thousand inhabitants).

Either 70000 or seventy thousand

I know that there are a lot of countries that suffer thefrom natural disasters like earthquakes and tsunamis, but here in Brazil, we don't have such huge calamities, which is one of the best parts of living in here.

From the window, I like watching the trees on the hills being blown by the wind on the hills from the window.

Reorganized so it's easier to follow.

The town I live is surrounded by hills and, which make the city feels more connected to the nature.

Even though the town is known byfor its historical importance, having a lot of houses with older architecture, when you live inside the town, the "magic" just disappears and I just look at them as old boring houses that are hindering the development of a more sophisticated and modern city.

There are not many places andto visit or things to do in my town.

Unfortunately, I'm highly likely to feel queasy duringwhile traveling via car or bus traveling because of the annoying motion sickness that I feel more than othe othersr people.

More natural: "Unfortunately I get motion sick very easily, so travelling long distances via car or bus is likely to make me queasy."

I get car sick easily too :')