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The tour plan
In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people. I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition . Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on. Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow". In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter. Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing.
今日の授業では、外国人旅行客向けの東北地方の旅行プランについての大会が行われました。この大会に向けて、チームメイトと一緒にスライドや動画の作成をしてきました。それぞれのチームが独自のテーマを与えられており、例えば「地元のグルメ」「絶景」「日本の精神」などです。私たちのチームのテーマは「冬と雪」でした。東北地方は冬にたくさん雪が降ります。私たちのプランはたくさんの雪にまつわるアクティビティを含んでいます。スキー、氷の上でのワカサギ釣り、雪かき体験、地吹雪体験などです。
In today's class, we had a competition ofto create a tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people.
"tour planning competition" works as well and has the same meaning as "competition to create a tour plan"---both are perfectly natural. The nuance of using each is that "____ competition" puts more emphasis on the competition, while "competition to ______" emphasizes the objective of the competition.
I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for ithis competition .
"this competition" fits but "it" is more natural since we can infer what "it" is from the last sentence.
Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.
In the Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.
Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.
Smelt fishing and snow shoveling work as noun phrases since "fishing" and "shoveling" are commonly-used nouns; "experiencing" unfortunately isn't very common to see that way.
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good work!
In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign peopleto create a tour plan for foreign visitors in the Tohoku region.
I had prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .
Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood"," "Breathtaking View"," "Japanese Spirits"," and so on.
Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow"."
In the Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.
Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.
In today's class, we had a competition of tour platour planning competition in Tohoku region for foreign people.
I hadl prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .
Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing of ground blizzards experiencing.
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Well done!
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The tour plan |
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In today's class, we had a conpetition of tour plan in Tohoku reagion for foregin people. |
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I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition. |
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Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on. Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow". Our team's theme was " |
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In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter. In the Tohoku re In the Tohoku re |
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Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing. Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing of ground blizzards Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards Smelt fishing and snow shoveling work as noun phrases since "fishing" and "shoveling" are commonly-used nouns; "experiencing" unfortunately isn't very common to see that way. |
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In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people. In today's class, we had a competition In today's class, we had a In today's class, we had a competition "tour planning competition" works as well and has the same meaning as "competition to create a tour plan"---both are perfectly natural. The nuance of using each is that "____ competition" puts more emphasis on the competition, while "competition to ______" emphasizes the objective of the competition. |
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I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition . I had prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition I I "this competition" fits but "it" is more natural since we can infer what "it" is from the last sentence. |
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