July 25, 2021
The Tokyo Olympics
Many Japanese people were opposed to holding the Tokyo Olympics. However, after the Olympics started, everyone is glued to the TV watching them. It's a shame because I think the Olympics would have been more exciting if the COVID-19 hadn't occurred.
多くの日本人は東京オリンピックの開催に反対でした。しかし、オリンピックが始まると、みんなテレビにかじりついてオリンピックを見ています。コロナが発生していなければ、もっと盛り上がっていたと思うので残念です。
The Tokyo Olympics
Many Japanese people were opposed to holding the Tokyo Olympics.
However, after the Olympics started, everyone is glued to the TV watching them.
It's a shame because I think the Olympics would have been more exciting if the COVID-19 hadn't occurred.
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Good work! I'm personally very impressed by the last sentence, that is a perfect English formality switch!
July 25, 2021
Thank you!
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Many Japanese people were opposed to holding the Tokyo Olympics. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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