Feb. 2, 2022
The Time
Does the time exist? The fourth dimension is intangible, you can't see it, but we can note their effects. The three first dimensions are bidirectional ones, but the time only can go in one direction, forward.
If time does not exist, the moviment doesn't exist either. All our world would be static. But it is move! The chemical and physical, it need of the time. The iron can be oxided. The sun raise each day, the seasons go on all years. And at the end, the live have pass too. We are born, live and to die. So we can sure the time exist. Sorry. It's late, bye!
Does the time exist?
The fourth dimension is intangible, you can't see it, but we can note theirits effects.
The three first dimensions are bidirectional ones, but the time only canime can only go in one direction, forward.
If time does not exist, the moviement doesn't exist either.
All ourOur entire world would be static.
But it idoes move!
TheChanges in chemical and physical, it need of the properties needs time.
Chemical changes are a physical change, so the sentence was a bit redundant I think. Chemical and physical properties are distinguished, however, if I remember correctly.
The iIron can be oxidized.
The sun raises each day, t; The seasons go on all years.
And at in the end, the liveing have to pass too.
We are born, live, and to die.
So we can be sure theat time exists.
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Interesting post and nicely written.
Feb. 3, 2022
TheChanges in chemical and physical, it need of the properties needs time.
With physical changes, i mean to "speed" or "acceleration" for example, that have the time as a parameter.
The Time
Does the time exist?
The fourth dimension is intangible, you can't see it, but we can note theirits effects.
The three first dimensions are bidirectional ones, but the time only can go in one direction, forward.
Normally in this context you do not need to say the time. Just time is sufficient
If time does not exist, the moviement doesn't exist either.
All our world would be static.
But it is on the move!
The chemical and physical, ithe needs of the time.
The meaning of this sentence is not clear
The iron can be oxided.
The sun raises each day, the seasons go on allby every years.
And at the end, the livfe haves to pass too.
We are born, to live and to die.
So we can be sure theat time exists.
Sorry.
It's late, bye!
Does the time exist?
The fourth dimension is intangible, y. You can't see it, but we can note theirits effects.
it = singular
their = plural
The three first dimensions are bidirectional ones, but the time only canime can only go in one direction, forward.
If time does not exist, then moviement doesn't exist either.
AllEverything in our world would be static.
But it is moveing!
TheBoth chemicalstry and physical, it need of ths require time.
I'm not quite sure what you meant. "Chemical" and "physical" are adjectives; they need a noun. "Chemistry" and "physics" are nouns; they are the scientific study of these things.
The iIron can be oxidized.
Maybe: Given time, iron can oxidize.
The sun raises each day, and the seasons go on allrepeat every years.
And at the end, the live havelives pass, too.
We are born, we live, and towe die.
So we can be sure theat time exists.
Sorry.
It's late, bye!
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Articles are hard! haha. Nice work, keep practicing!!
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The chemical and physical, it need of the time.
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The iron can be oxided.
Maybe: Given time, iron can oxidize.
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