Dec. 28, 2024
The third studying day
Good morning everyone,I feel so tired today，I had been cried from ten o'clock last night until today two o'clock,because I feel very sad yesterday,I think I am so bad and my friends are excellent and intelligent. I envy them very much.They can travel with others friends to other places,and they english spoken is fluent,I feel I had hardly studying but I don't have a great progress.Finally,I sleep only four hours,because I can't sleeping now,have a good sleep is so difficult with me.so I ofen feel very fail.
大家早上好，今天很累，昨天从晚上十点哭到了今天凌晨两点。对比之下，我的朋友们朋友都很优秀，她们能毫无顾忌地和其他朋友们去旅游，她们英语也很好口语流利，而我努力了那么久感觉没看到什么进步。加上入睡困难才睡了四个钟头，感觉自己糟糕透了，太失败了。
Good morning everyone,I feel so tired today，I hadve been criedying from ten o'clock last night until today two o'clock,because I feelt very sad yesterday,.I think I am so bad and my friends are excellent and intelligent.
I envy them veryso much.They can travel with others friends to other places,and they english spoken isspeak English fluent,ly. I feel I had hardly studying but I don't have a great progress.Finally,I sleep only four hours,because I can't sleeping now,have alike I study hard and I don't make progress. I also sleep only four hours. Having good sleep is so difficult with me.so I ofen feel very and that makes me feel like a failure.
Dec. 28, 2024
Thank you,but I have more understand with your write.
The third day of studying day
Good morning everyone, I feel so tired today，I had been cried. I was crying from ten o'clock last night until today two o'clock,wo in the morning because I feelt very sad yesterday,I think I am so bad and. I don't think I'm good enough while my friends are excellent and intelligent.
I omitted 'o'clock' and added 'last night' and 'in the morning' to clarify the time frame.
'good enough' is the perfect way to phrase what you are trying to say.
I really envy them very much. They can travel with others friends to other places, and they english spokenir spoken English is fluent,. I feel I had hardly studying but I don't have a great progress.Finally,I sleep onlylike I have been intensely studying but I haven't made much progress. In the end, I only slept four hours, because I caouldn't sleeping now,have a and getting good sleep is so difficult withfor me.s So I often feel very fail.like a failure.
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I'm sorry you are feeling like this!
Your writing was honestly pretty good so just remember that we are our own worst critics! If this is only your third day of studying, I can't imagine how good your writing will be on your 30th day of studying.
If you have any questions about the corrections I made, don't hesitate to ask me!
Dec. 28, 2024
Thank you very much.But I have many questions but I don't know how to study and understand your writing after.As me is a lot difficult,but I can't how to speak it.
Dec. 28, 2024
I understand! You write good and will improve a lot if you write every day.
I'm patient so you can ask me any question and I will try to answer it.
Good luck!
Dec. 28, 2024
OK，I will try to study every day.Thank you.
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Good morning everyone,I feel so tired today，I had been cried from ten o'clock last night until today two o'clock,because I feel very sad yesterday,I think I am so bad and my friends are excellent and intelligent. Good morning everyone, I feel so tired today I omitted 'o'clock' and added 'last night' and 'in the morning' to clarify the time frame. 'good enough' is the perfect way to phrase what you are trying to say. Good morning everyone,I feel so tired today，I ha |
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I envy them very much.They can travel with others friends to other places,and they english spoken is fluent,I feel I had hardly studying but I don't have a great progress.Finally,I sleep only four hours,because I can't sleeping now,have a good sleep is so difficult with me.so I ofen feel very fail. I really envy them I envy them |
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