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Oct. 29, 2025

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Today is wednesday. I woke up at 7:30. I will wake up at 6 o'clock. Because i will take a walk. Actually, i don't really know. Haha. I will cook Indonesian foods with people from BIPA class. I do not like it a bit. However i like nasi goreng. It is delicious. It's favorite Insonesian food.

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Today is wWednesday.

Remember to use a capital letter for days of the week.

I woke up at 7:30am.

I would use "am" and "pm" for markers of time to differentiate if this was morning or evening.

I willanted to wake up at 6 o'clock.:00am

Hmm, this is a bit confusing because you just said in the previous sentence that you woke up at 7:30am. This sentence implies that you will wake up an hour and a half earlier. Since that doesn't work, I guessed that you might have meant that you wanted to wake up at 6:00am?

Bbecause iI willanted to take a walk.

You should combine this as one sentence: "I wanted to wake up at 6:00am because I wanted to take a walk." The way you had it was not technically a full sentence.

Actually, i don't really know.

Haha.

We wouldn't really have "haha" in formal writing. More appropriate for texts or messages being sent back and forth.

I will cook Indonesian foods with people from BIPAmy class.

What is BIPA? If you want to reference that, you can give more detail. I changed it to "my class" to account for any confusion.

I do not like it a bitcooking at all.

You say you don't like "it" one bit...what is "it" here? I switched it to "cooking" for clarity.

However i, I like nasi goreng.

Remember to capitalize "I" and any other proper noun.

It is delicious.

It's my favorite Insdonesian food.

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Well done! There was a bit of confusion with some of the wording. You'll want to be more specific in the words that you use. Using "it" can be too vague. Remember also to capitalize proper nouns, like "Wednesday" and "I" in this essay. Otherwise, well done! Nasi goreng sounds good.

Today is wWednesday.

Days of the week are capitalized.

I will wake up at 6 o'clock.

In the previous sentence, you wrote "I woke up at 7:30." So are you referring to waking up at 6 tomorrow? If so, "I will wake up at 6 o'clock tomorrow" might be better.

Also, if you want to be consistent with your formatting, changing 6 o'clock to 6:00 might be better. Unless 6 o'clock is a stylistic choice.

Because iI will take a walk.

I is always capitalized (unless it is in lowercase for stylistic reasons in text messages or the like).
If it is a desire, replacing "will" with "want to" might make it more clear. "Because I want to take a walk."

Actually, iI don't really know.

Capital I.

I will cook Indonesian foods with people from my BIPA class.

Would also be better if you specify when.
For example, "This afternoon I will cook..." "Tomorrow I will cook..."

I do not like it a bit.

"I don't really like it" sounds more natural.

However i, I like nasi goreng.

It is delicious.

You could also combine this with the previous sentence: "However, I like nasi goreng because it is delicious."

It's my favorite Insdonesian food.

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Today is wednesday.


Today is wWednesday.

Days of the week are capitalized.

Today is wWednesday.

Remember to use a capital letter for days of the week.

I woke up at 7:30.


I woke up at 7:30am.

I would use "am" and "pm" for markers of time to differentiate if this was morning or evening.

I will wake up at 6 o'clock.


I will wake up at 6 o'clock.

In the previous sentence, you wrote "I woke up at 7:30." So are you referring to waking up at 6 tomorrow? If so, "I will wake up at 6 o'clock tomorrow" might be better. Also, if you want to be consistent with your formatting, changing 6 o'clock to 6:00 might be better. Unless 6 o'clock is a stylistic choice.

I willanted to wake up at 6 o'clock.:00am

Hmm, this is a bit confusing because you just said in the previous sentence that you woke up at 7:30am. This sentence implies that you will wake up an hour and a half earlier. Since that doesn't work, I guessed that you might have meant that you wanted to wake up at 6:00am?

Because i will take a walk.


Because iI will take a walk.

I is always capitalized (unless it is in lowercase for stylistic reasons in text messages or the like). If it is a desire, replacing "will" with "want to" might make it more clear. "Because I want to take a walk."

Bbecause iI willanted to take a walk.

You should combine this as one sentence: "I wanted to wake up at 6:00am because I wanted to take a walk." The way you had it was not technically a full sentence.

Actually, i don't really know.


Actually, iI don't really know.

Capital I.

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Haha.


Haha.

We wouldn't really have "haha" in formal writing. More appropriate for texts or messages being sent back and forth.

I do not like it a bit.


I do not like it a bit.

"I don't really like it" sounds more natural.

I do not like it a bitcooking at all.

You say you don't like "it" one bit...what is "it" here? I switched it to "cooking" for clarity.

I will cook Indonesian foods with people from BIPA class.


I will cook Indonesian foods with people from my BIPA class.

Would also be better if you specify when. For example, "This afternoon I will cook..." "Tomorrow I will cook..."

I will cook Indonesian foods with people from BIPAmy class.

What is BIPA? If you want to reference that, you can give more detail. I changed it to "my class" to account for any confusion.

However i like nasi goreng.


However i, I like nasi goreng.

However i, I like nasi goreng.

Remember to capitalize "I" and any other proper noun.

It is delicious.


It is delicious.

You could also combine this with the previous sentence: "However, I like nasi goreng because it is delicious."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's favorite Insonesian food.


It's my favorite Insdonesian food.

It's my favorite Insdonesian food.

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