June 1, 2020
The things I want to start doing
Recently, I’m interested in yoga again.
It’s not normal yoga named yien yoga.
When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in local high school, a teacher who is also yoga instructor had free yoga class for teachers tied from preparing online classes because of corona virus.
They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer equal education as good as possible for all student, so I really respected them and it motivated me.
I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercise.
In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lesson for half year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to their studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it.
However, I was really enjoying that yoga, it’s totally different! I heard It’s good for tight shoulder and neck, hopefully, it helps mine better.
The things I want to start doing
Recently, I’mve become interested in yoga again.
It’s a differenot nformal of yoga namcalled yien yoga.
When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in a local high school, a teacher who is also a yoga instructor hadtaught free yoga class fores to the teachers tied fromwho were preparing online classes because of corona virus.
hopefully that was the meaning you were going for in the last sentence
They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer equalthe best education as good as possible for all students (considering the situation we are going through), so I really respected them and it motivated me.
I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercises.
In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lessons for half a year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to t aheir studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it.
I don't know what you were going for in that last sentence sorry.
If you were trying to express cause then 'in spite of' should be remplaced by 'but because of'.
I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck, hopefully, it helpfixes mine betteraswell.
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Pretty good overrall,slight grammatical errors but it's readable for the most
The things I want to start doing
Recently, I’m've become interested in yoga again.
This just sounds more natural to me. Maybe other natives would disagree.
It’'s not normala different kind of yoga namcalled "yien yoga".
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They’ve had never experienced thissuch a situation before, but they tried to offer equal education as goodequal as possible for all students, so I really respected them, and it motivated me.
I prefer this yoga to normal oneyoga because it has more activities and exercises.
In Japan, I’ve taken took yoga lessons for half a year, but as I’m was not interested in thait, I’ve be went to their studio only couple of times in despite ofthe expensive payments, so I quit it.
However, I was really enjoying thatyien yoga,; it’s totally different!
I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck, h. Hopefully, it helps mine get better.
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Recently, I’m interested in yoga again. Recently, I This just sounds more natural to me. Maybe other natives would disagree. Recently, I’ |
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It’s not normal yoga named yien yoga. It It’s a differen |
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When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in local high school, a teacher who is also yoga instructor had free yoga class for teachers tied from preparing online classes because of corona virus. When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in a local high school, a teacher who When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in a local high school, a teacher who is also a yoga instructor hopefully that was the meaning you were going for in the last sentence |
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They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer equal education as good as possible for all student, so I really respected them and it motivated me. They They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer |
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I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercise. I prefer this yoga to normal I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercises. |
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In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lesson for half year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to their studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it. In Japan, I In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lessons for half a year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to t aheir studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it. I don't know what you were going for in that last sentence sorry. If you were trying to express cause then 'in spite of' should be remplaced by 'but because of'. |
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However, I was really enjoying that yoga, it’s totally different! However, I was really enjoying |
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I heard It’s good for tight shoulder and neck, hopefully, it helps mine better. I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck, hopefully, it |
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