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The technology made life easier and helped us find a lot of solutions in the world. For example, the advantage of technology is that it makes learning online easier. You can open the internet anytime, anywhere, and start to learn. You don't need to spend a lot of time or money to travel to get the knowledge, and the technology has helped people in the world, especially in the medical field, and find a new cure for hard diseases. The technology has helped famished people in the world to get solutions for growing a lot of fruit and vegetables, but we should know something not everything in this world is good; there are some advantages and disadvantages. The disadvantages are spying and hackers, also, the biggest problem of technology is social media, the social media makes people know all private things. Scandals, honestly, I hate social media because it makes everything bad, it's trash, and makes people sick, brain-rot, but in my opinion, if you need to be a good person and make your life good, reduce using social media, and you will feel well, you can start to heal yourself now and make your life nice.

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The Technology

For talking about something in general, don't add "the." You would add "the" when you are referencing something specifically.

Examples:

Technology is advancing rapidly. => Speaking generally about (any and all) technology

The technology he created will change our lives. => Speaking specifically about a certain technology

The technology madekes life easier and helpeds us find a lot of solutions in the world.

For example, the advantage of current technology is that it makes learning online easier.

You can open the internet anytime, anywhere, and start to learning/studying.

You don't need to spend a lot of time or money to travel to get theis knowledge, and the technology has helped people inacross the world, especially in the medical field, andto find a new cures for hardsevere diseases.

The technology has helped famished people in the world to get solutions for growing a lot ofpeople who are food insecure to find better ways to grow fruit and vegetables, b. But we should know someone thing, not everything in this world is good; there are some advantages and disadvantages.

The disadvantages arinclude spying and hackers, a. Also, the biggest problem of technology is social media, the social media makewhich allows people to know all lot private thingsinformation.

SIt is scandalous, honestly,. I hate social media because it makes everything bad,; it's trash, and makes people sick,. It's brain-rot, but i. In my opinion, if you need to be a good person and make your life good, reduce usinghave a good life, reduce your usage of social media, and you will feel well, ybetter. You can start to heal yourself starting now and make your life nicebetter.

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Great job. Sorry for skimping on explanations at the end, I suddenly realized I have to go somewhere!

The Technology

The technology has made life easier and helped us find a lot of solutions in the world.

If you say "the technology", I'm expecting you to be referring to a very specific piece of technology previously mentioned. When speaking more generally, it's just "technology."

For example, thean advantage of technology is that it makes learning online easier.

You can open the internet anytime, anywhere, and start to learn.

You don't need to spend a lot of time or money to travel to get the knowledge, and the technology has helped (many) people in the world, especially in the medical field, andto find a new cure for hard diseases.

or "... has helped people all over the world"

The technology has helped famished people in the world (to) get solutions for growing a lot of fruit and vegetables, but we should know something: not everything in this world is good; there are some advantages and disadvantages.

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Pretty good! I would suggest you break your writing into smaller sentences. A lot of this is "run on sentences" that should really be separated.

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You can open the internet anytime, anywhere, and start to learn.


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You can open the internet anytime, anywhere, and start to learning/studying.

You don't need to spend a lot of time or money to travel to get the knowledge, and the technology has helped people in the world, especially in the medical field, and find a new cure for hard diseases.


You don't need to spend a lot of time or money to travel to get the knowledge, and the technology has helped (many) people in the world, especially in the medical field, andto find a new cure for hard diseases.

or "... has helped people all over the world"

You don't need to spend a lot of time or money to travel to get theis knowledge, and the technology has helped people inacross the world, especially in the medical field, andto find a new cures for hardsevere diseases.

The technology has helped famished people in the world to get solutions for growing a lot of fruit and vegetables, but we should know something not everything in this world is good; there are some advantages and disadvantages.


The technology has helped famished people in the world (to) get solutions for growing a lot of fruit and vegetables, but we should know something: not everything in this world is good; there are some advantages and disadvantages.

The technology has helped famished people in the world to get solutions for growing a lot ofpeople who are food insecure to find better ways to grow fruit and vegetables, b. But we should know someone thing, not everything in this world is good; there are some advantages and disadvantages.

The disadvantages are spying and hackers, also, the biggest problem of technology is social media, the social media makes people know all private things.


The disadvantages arinclude spying and hackers, a. Also, the biggest problem of technology is social media, the social media makewhich allows people to know all lot private thingsinformation.

Scandals, honestly, I hate social media because it makes everything bad, it's trash, and makes people sick, brain-rot, but in my opinion, if you need to be a good person and make your life good, reduce using social media, and you will feel well, you can start to heal yourself now and make your life nice.


SIt is scandalous, honestly,. I hate social media because it makes everything bad,; it's trash, and makes people sick,. It's brain-rot, but i. In my opinion, if you need to be a good person and make your life good, reduce usinghave a good life, reduce your usage of social media, and you will feel well, ybetter. You can start to heal yourself starting now and make your life nicebetter.

The Technology


The Technology

The Technology

For talking about something in general, don't add "the." You would add "the" when you are referencing something specifically. Examples: Technology is advancing rapidly. => Speaking generally about (any and all) technology The technology he created will change our lives. => Speaking specifically about a certain technology

The technology made life easier and helped us find a lot of solutions in the world.


The technology has made life easier and helped us find a lot of solutions in the world.

If you say "the technology", I'm expecting you to be referring to a very specific piece of technology previously mentioned. When speaking more generally, it's just "technology."

The technology madekes life easier and helpeds us find a lot of solutions in the world.

For example, the advantage of technology is that it makes learning online easier.


For example, thean advantage of technology is that it makes learning online easier.

For example, the advantage of current technology is that it makes learning online easier.

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