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Because he was poor, he could not get married, which made him very sad for a long time.

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Today is lLunar July the seventh, i. It is also the Tanabata Festival which most people regard as Chinese Valentine's Day.

Theis festival originates from a tale.

Long, long ago, there was a girl named Zhinv (which means 'weaver').

She was the seventh daughter of the Emperor, who' is the king of the universe.

Writing the words separately as "who is" just makes it a bit easier to understand, especially when reading out loud.

One day, she was curious of the zoneabout the realm where human beings lived so she left the sky with her elder sisters.

They soon felt tired soon, so they decided to take a showerrelax and wash in a beautiful lake.

The sentence sounds a little better with "soon" as the 2nd word, especially with it being in a story style.
Also, "take a shower" sounds like quite a modern-day action, so it doesn't suit this old tale.

There was a man named Niulang (which means 'cowboy) '), who was very poor and a. All he had was a buffalo.

The last part needs to be a separate sentence to make sense. Or, you could say:
"who was very poor and had only one buffalo." Either is fine.

He asked Niulang to obey his instructions totallyword for word.

Then he led Niulang to a lake where some beautiful girls were taking a shower pleasantbathing peacefully.

"Dido you see the clothes over there?

Just take itBring them here and hide for a while."

"Clothes" is a plural word, so we need to use "them".

T said the buffalo said.

Minutes later, the girls started to get dressed and leftave.

But there was aone girl fellleft behind who couldn't find her clothes.

She was so worried and cry quicklstarted to cry.

So, when the Empress discovered her daughter's marriage, the couple had havealready had two kids: a boy and a girl.

"had had" is called 'the past perfect' tense. It's used for one past event which happened before another past event.
Event 1 = the couple has kids -> past perfect "had had"
Event 2 = the Empress discovered this -> past simple "discovered"

The Empress was so angry that she askdemanded Zhinv to go to trial.

The word "asked" sounds quite calm and polite, but the Empress is very angry, so a stronger word like "demanded" would be better.

Niulang tried to chaserun away with his children, but the Empress drawedew a galaxy to stop him.

"To chase" means to pursue someone/something else.

Seeing wthat they were suffering, the magpies wasere moved, and so built a bridge bywith their bodies to give a chance to the couple a chance to reunionte one day a year.

How many magpies are there? Be careful with your verbs:
"the magpie was moved" or "the magpies were moved"

But after reading an article, I've feel completely felt disgusted ofby it.

He peeked at Zhinv taking a showerwhile she was bathing, which was illegal.

He took her clothes away without permitssion, which was stealing.

And he forced her to marry him which made him a raperist.

And I hope there will beat more people towill realize this point, especially women.